~I Take You in...

~I Take You in...

A Poem by Frieda P

Follow me
              into this haven
       of serenity
feel my soul
           upon your lips
touch the breath
        of my fervor 
escape with me 
            to  surrender
       intoxicate my euphoria
             to release
       smother my exhilaration
            in exaltation
submit to the longing
          in my loins
       enter into my soft lightness
I take you in
             as a deep inhale
you splay the nape of
sweet gasping whispers 
               the world has moved
  anointed with nirvana's
                          
 sweet death

whilst entangled
                 in rapturous
                       pause

© 2013 Frieda P


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I did that in the hot tub last night...amazing how I can still get my feet up that high with the help of bubbling water ;-) I kneed myself in the nose a couple of times, hurt like hell...and one of the jets left an imprint on my left butt cheek...all in all, not my favorite position...at least doggy style I can still drink my drink...

Oh...did you write a poem? Hm...yes...it's quite lovely...quite lovely indeed...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Oh sweet, you're having a mother/daughter day, is she drinking too? ;-P
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

She may as well be, I bought her a Mountain Dew this morning...the child is insane on Mountain Dew. .. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Hahaha my poor little kimmer, she has no chance, no chance at all! Lol



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This is so sensual and sexy! I love what you did

Posted 11 Years Ago


I did that in the hot tub last night...amazing how I can still get my feet up that high with the help of bubbling water ;-) I kneed myself in the nose a couple of times, hurt like hell...and one of the jets left an imprint on my left butt cheek...all in all, not my favorite position...at least doggy style I can still drink my drink...

Oh...did you write a poem? Hm...yes...it's quite lovely...quite lovely indeed...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Oh sweet, you're having a mother/daughter day, is she drinking too? ;-P
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

She may as well be, I bought her a Mountain Dew this morning...the child is insane on Mountain Dew. .. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Hahaha my poor little kimmer, she has no chance, no chance at all! Lol
How to teach your toes to curl in three , no four easy steps.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Just "out of breath" passion, but expressed in such a way that one seems more to float along on the ripples of the pond to a point as this rather than in a motor boat, and that is such a dreamy way to arrive to such a place! Delightfully naughty but more like behind the locked door of erotica!
Beautiful..........while entangled in rapturous pause.......love that thought!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Always love reading what you have to say Shelia, thanks so much!
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Nice...you're featured :-)
A very tastefully written dream (or reality) of unbridled sensuality. You have quite a writing range, Frieda. I wonder, do you realize how talented you are?
Bravo, dear!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I think I love you Sera, you humble me with your review, thanks so much!
This is so detailed is breathingly amazing and you step out of your box everytime i come to read your work you inspire me... You really do...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Woo, great review there Kels... :-)
Lover Of Words

11 Years Ago

LOL thanks your great
Excellent piece! I love the line- "I take you, in as a deep inhale"

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

So happy you enjoyed this one Barbara. Thank you.
I love how the intangible things become tangible here...a soul is felt, breath is touched, the world moves in ecstasy and comes to a post-coital pause...the imagery is in perfect sync with the pace of the activity it evokes...well done Miss R ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

I think I heard that one too. or part of it :)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I give the fook up! ;-P
kublakhan27

11 Years Ago

Haha you do stump me on occasion ;P
Ahhh, this was a breath of fresh air. :)
Great write, Miss. Frieda P.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

So pleased you felt that way, thanks Umbra. :-)
A very interesting mix of sensuality and spirituality. It is like cleansing the soul while stimulating the heart.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I love the way you put that Dale, thanks muchly.
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

You are welcome mucho... and thank you :)

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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