Moon Struck

Moon Struck

A Poem by Frieda P
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For the Crimson diavolo, you know who you are...let it be me.

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Celestial skies were brilliantly bursting that night
       my eyes were open wide
             when I tripped into you
swiftly fell to the rhythm of your heat
          sweet was the fluid dance
                   of merging hearts
like moonbeams that pranced on twilight lit seas
         i believed in you  as the promised religion
    got lost in the nirvana of your touch
         i surrendered my soul in lush tones of oleander
luscious poison, so enthralling, it hurt so good
            this caged freedom of flight clipped
                                  my wayward gypsy wings
i wantonly entrusted them to your care
 you inspired me to captivate the moon
                              in reckless abandon
i wished upon an imploding stellar star 
          that this crash commune in divine reality






© 2013 Frieda P


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This is absolutely stunning, Frieda. I love the words you chose for this piece.....the images of white oleander, the gypsy wings, the stellar star......mesmerizing. This is perhaps my favorite yet. Such a vivid imagination you portray in your writings. I'm enthralled.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Frieda P

8 Years Ago

I'm enthralled by your review Amber, thanks so much, really appreciate it, love the oleander myself... read more
Avocations of Amber

8 Years Ago

Just hurry up and write some more! haha.... :) can't wait to read them.....



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I'm finding all manner of gems on page 11 of my RR queue ;-) This is simply stunning...

Posted 8 Years Ago


Beautiful... Once again, you've created a masterpiece. ;)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Great use of words written with confidence, I enjoyed the images you created here :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

8 Years Ago

Thanks Amy, glad you enjoyed this one. :-)
Beautifully sensuous in feel.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

8 Years Ago

Thank you kind sir, have a great weekend Michael.
Such a coincidental accident, stumbling into a person beneath the moonlight only to realize the person IS the moon.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

8 Years Ago

I like what you said there Tai, thanks so much.
This is beautifully ethereal. It speaks to the core of love and the freedom to enjoy it. Again I love the form you have chosen. This one is a gem.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

8 Years Ago

So thrilled you like this one blue, thanks.
Opening your poems is like opening Pandora's box..... excited at the thought of knowing there is something fabulous inside..

You do not cease to amaze Fp... you are a brilliant poetess keeping all on WC on their toes with your delightful reads..

Loving the style and format.

Wonderfully penned too :O)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

8 Years Ago

Wow YB, thanks so much, you've made me smile like a crazy woman :-)
Words words words. They make it all sound so magical :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

8 Years Ago

That's what it's about right, words? Thanks :-)
Shivam Murari

8 Years Ago

Indeed!
Quite interesting. The poem shows lines between what some may call 'fantasy' and 'reality' while showing that love mixes them together in a wonderful composition of life.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Frieda P

8 Years Ago

Probably more fantasy, thanks so much for your visit and thoughts here, much appreciated.
like moonbeams that pranced on twilight lit seas
i believed in you as the promised religion
got lost in the nirvana of your touch

this is a very creative piece i love the lines above in it :) excellent write

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reading, much appreciate the visit. :-)

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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