Moon Struck

For the Crimson diavolo, you know who you are...let it be me.

Celestial skies were brilliantly bursting that night

       my eyes were open wide

             when I tripped into you

swiftly fell to the rhythm of your heat

          sweet was the fluid dance

                   of merging hearts

like moonbeams that pranced on twilight lit seas

         i believed in you  as the promised religion

    got lost in the nirvana of your touch

         i surrendered my soul in lush tones of oleander

luscious poison, so enthralling, it hurt so good

            this caged freedom of flight clipped

                                  my wayward gypsy wings

i wantonly entrusted them to your care

 you inspired me to captivate the moon

                              in reckless abandon

i wished upon an imploding stellar star 

          that this crash commune in divine reality

Author's Note

Reviews

[Avocations of Amber]

This is absolutely stunning, Frieda. I love the words you chose for this piece.....the images of white oleander, the gypsy wings, the stellar star......mesmerizing. This is perhaps my favorite yet. Such a vivid imagination you portray in your writings. I'm enthralled.

[Frieda P]

I'm enthralled by your review Amber, thanks so much, really appreciate it, love the oleander myself. :-)

[Avocations of Amber]

Just hurry up and write some more! haha.... :) can't wait to read them.....

[Androglossia]

Your words are ethereal they leave me breathless. Love is perfectly conveyed and I felt it, here, in my heart. I especially liked the "moonbeams that pranced on twilight lit seas" line. Very romantitc.

[Frieda P]

Breathless eh? Thanks, so good of you to say Maryanne, Steven gagged on that same line, ha...men. smh :-)

[Hatchling]

Amazing

[Frieda P]

So nice of you to say Wolflover, thanks.

[Hatchling]

You're welcome

[Rhianne Ney]

Another greatly written poem, is it just me or you seem to create wonderful pieces everyday. It seems like you never lack inspiration either (:
Great job and continue working wonders

[Frieda P]

Thanks Rhianne, much appreciate your kind words, it's like therapy for me, so yeah I HAVE to write everyday, you don't see the clunkers lol ;-)

[Rhianne Ney]

That's alright and that's discipline~

[Pete Langley]

Can I take what you`re taking, Frieda? Another smashing.I can hear the heavenly applause. P.

[Frieda P]

Thank you kind sir. x

[Baby Ricochet]

Nice. You must really like that person

[Frieda P]

Thanks Mark.

[tamsen grier]

Holy synesthesia! My favorite literary device, used to great effect in these lines. This poem is a wonderful assault on the senses. It's so physical, so grounded, and so otherworldly.

[Frieda P]

Wow, what a great review, thanks for stopping by, much appreciated tamsen.

[Muse]

Ache Frieda...when you want to write pretty...it is so nauseating...all the warm good fuzzy feelings it inspires. This was a beautiful example of being moon struck. Cher would be proud of you. xo

[Frieda P]

Oi she's back in all her gooey goodness! Thanks Muse, sometimes you just gotta go there, even if you do so kicking & screaming! xo

Glad to see you came to your senses. ;-)

[Steven]

'like moonbeams that pranced on twilight lit seas'

oh god that's gushy... god...

[Frieda P]

You better mean 'gushy' in a gooey good way buster. ;-P thanks Steven...

[Steven]

ha.. you can always count on my honesty, eh?

[Frieda P]

Yeah you're brutal ;-)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

F-Fanstastic write as always

R-Realisitic and resonates volumes of metaphor and imagery

I-Intimate writes splendid with her rich sensuality

E-Exquisites writer always attracts and influence readers

D-Divalicious words expressed in any of her art piece

A-Artistic woman with a rich imaginations

[Frieda P]

Woo Marc, big cheesy smile here! Having this one framed...thanks so much my dear friend! :-)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol say cheese :) welcome Frie, you always deserved the best because you are one of the greatest in WC.

[Frieda P]

You're looking at a big sloppy kiss coming your way! mwah! ;-P

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol :)

[Frieda P]

:-)