Moon Struck

For the Crimson diavolo, you know who you are...let it be me.

Celestial skies were brilliantly bursting that night

       my eyes were open wide

             when I tripped into you

swiftly fell to the rhythm of your heat

          sweet was the fluid dance

                   of merging hearts

like moonbeams that pranced on twilight lit seas

         i believed in you  as the promised religion

    got lost in the nirvana of your touch

         i surrendered my soul in lush tones of oleander

luscious poison, so enthralling, it hurt so good

            this caged freedom of flight clipped

                                  my wayward gypsy wings

i wantonly entrusted them to your care

 you inspired me to captivate the moon

                              in reckless abandon

i wished upon an imploding stellar star 

          that this crash commune in divine reality

Author's Note

Reviews

[Avocations of Amber]

This is absolutely stunning, Frieda. I love the words you chose for this piece.....the images of white oleander, the gypsy wings, the stellar star......mesmerizing. This is perhaps my favorite yet. Such a vivid imagination you portray in your writings. I'm enthralled.

[Frieda P]

I'm enthralled by your review Amber, thanks so much, really appreciate it, love the oleander myself. :-)

[Avocations of Amber]

Just hurry up and write some more! haha.... :) can't wait to read them.....

[redflutterby]

Your sweet words are a symphony to my ears. You never hold back...always giving to the last ounce of creativity. Surrender....be inspired...give in to reckless abandon. Divine reality is a beautiful thing...your star hangs high in the sky. All you need do is reach for it...

This one goes in my library for further admiration.... ;-x

[Frieda P]

Doing the happy dance, on tabletop! ;-P Thanks Red x

[A.E. Surdam]

Absolutely lovely. Beautiful imagery. And you have a magnificent way with words. I love the line, "my wayward gypsy wings." Just beautiful. Great write!

[Frieda P]

So nice of you to say Amber, thanks, much appreciated.

[A.E. Surdam]

You are most welcome.

[KeeD]

What spectacular out of this world imagery..
Captivating love.. This poem twinkled brighter than the brightest star.

[Frieda P]

Woo, thanks Kee, jazzed you liked this one love x