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 Flammable Dandelion Mutterings

Flammable Dandelion Mutterings

A Poem by Frieda P

i drink you in like fine french cognac
breathe you like springtime's essence
you lift my spirits like a butterfly
when you flutterby to touch my heart,
i've lived in a castle with no vision
let down my hair in portend reluctance
trusting hands caught my presence
i lost my balance and toppled over
still wary of trespassing recalcitrance
breathless i caught a glimpse
of what I'd been missing
like sweet poetry I liquefied
a lovely taste upon the lips
still frightful after all these years
your stanza brought me to my knees
i kneel in this verse, inward hesitation
in wait for an exposition to slay
my prayer is a chant of endless mutterings
let this warm light dissipate any nagging doubts
so that i may dwell in the music of harmony's concerto
sweetness of dandelions youthful yearnings

© 2013 Frieda P


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I pray you always dwell in the music of harmony's concerto dear Frieda. This poem nourished me this morning, washed over me in warm breezes and gave me breath, where none had existed before. This is absoluetly beautiful. the fact that you manage to share a small piece of your creative vision each day with us is a truly wondrous gift.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

8 Years Ago

As your kind words always nourish me Jack...thank you never seems enough. x



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Frieda, this is gorgeous poetry I have to admit I don`t understand a word of....but I don`t care!!! It`s lovely just wallowing in it...like laying in a summerfield of dandelions watching the clouds scud. You clever girl. P.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

8 Years Ago

It's about trust Pete, you know when you were an innocent child and trust came easily...or so it sho.. read more
Pete Langley

8 Years Ago

Yes, I see it now. Thanks xx
Very beautifully written...it sounds soo wonderful...well done

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Frieda P

8 Years Ago

Thanks fancyfati.
Very sweet...sounds like a lovelier spring than I'm experiencing....

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Frieda P

8 Years Ago

Spring is being awfully fickle I do agree Marie, thanks.
you remember how to whistle don't you? you just put your lips together and blow....and then watch the dandelion puffball disintegrate and disperse among the warm summer breeze, reaching out to colonize the world with her gentle seed.....well done, posy!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Frieda P

8 Years Ago

Gotta love that line Bogie, 'the other times you're just a stinker'! ha, thanks so much! ;-)
quinfinn

8 Years Ago

you know you love me, don't fight it.....
Warmness like experiencing a morning for the first new time in a long time.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Frieda P

8 Years Ago

What a sweet review Ken, thanks so much.
Each new day b brings new hope... a very inspiring poem that radiates positivity.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Frieda P

8 Years Ago

I'm not sure, did you start drinking early? Lol ;-P
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

8 Years Ago

Probably just tired from the long week, maybe I should have been drinking.
Frieda P

8 Years Ago

Lol sounds like a plan!
Each line is a soaring note in a wondrous symphony. May you dwell there softly wrapped in the arms of this harmony. What a sweet sound in the morning. ;-)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Frieda P

8 Years Ago

Glad I could start the day off with you Red! ;-)
I pray you always dwell in the music of harmony's concerto dear Frieda. This poem nourished me this morning, washed over me in warm breezes and gave me breath, where none had existed before. This is absoluetly beautiful. the fact that you manage to share a small piece of your creative vision each day with us is a truly wondrous gift.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

8 Years Ago

As your kind words always nourish me Jack...thank you never seems enough. x

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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