Heart Flutters

Heart Flutters

A Poem by Frieda P

I've read many sad tunes
           written quite a few,
when my heart flutters
    through your life chapters 
       to reminisce your memories,
butterflies arouse to float on zephyrs
         easing the formlessness of my soul


© 2013 Frieda P


Author's Note

Frieda P
On a lighter note, the pic moved me to think of the lovely memories, even in death, they live on in our hearts.

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Hmm statistically it is shown that people tend to cling to their better memories no matter how horrendous that particular time period was I guess we were meant to be resilient when it's all said and done we all like to go back the old times whether good or bad to get a bit of Heart Flutters Great writing Frieda

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Always cling to the best ones, sometimes the other just shove their way in, thanks Deron.



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This poem is like cake... Light, airy, and delicious to read. ^.^ Great work!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks Skittles, glad you liked it. :-)
I like the gentleness and hope of the words in the poem. Memories are like butterflies wings. Appear to make us happy and sometimes sad. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

I like that Coyote, 'memories are like butterfly wings'...thanks so much.
Hmm statistically it is shown that people tend to cling to their better memories no matter how horrendous that particular time period was I guess we were meant to be resilient when it's all said and done we all like to go back the old times whether good or bad to get a bit of Heart Flutters Great writing Frieda

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Always cling to the best ones, sometimes the other just shove their way in, thanks Deron.
Nice little poem

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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks Mark.
Beautiful thoughts!

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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Glad you liked my musings Sera....thanks muchly.
This is poignant and beautiful

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much TL, glad you enjoyed this one.
May I suggest an organized compilation piece, to be titled, simply, "Butterflies and Zephyrs"? You could post all of these beautiful works in one book, as it were, and I may even know a certain someone who could help you out with getting it published ;-)

Just a thought...xoxo

Posted 6 Years Ago


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KAOlmsted

6 Years Ago

That is the highest compliment I have received in ages, that i sound like Steve xD Thanks ;-)
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Well, I love you both with my whole arse, so that says a lot! Ha, you know that one, it's bigger ;.. read more
KAOlmsted

6 Years Ago

xoxo
This is a mournful write with a strong sense of beauty in it. Inks how your represent what remembering that person does. I have to say that the what you have put forth is unique; I have never read a piece that described remembering that way. I recently read a piece that talked about making pockets in the heart for memories, and that people are never truly gone if we delve into those pockets. I think this poems takes that idea further and shows what happens when one of those pockets are opened.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Intriguing idea, I like the notion of a pocket...will have to think on that one, thanks so much Cloc.. read more
When our thoughts and memories sadden us, borrow someone else's!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

May I borrow yours?
Barbara Walker

6 Years Ago

You can borrow my good memories, but we'll just keep those bad onbes back there, where they belong!
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Sounds like a plan. ;-)
A sad, sad piece of writing. Would they be called a Weeping of Loss, I wonder. We can't stop hurting, not completely but for those we've lost we have to live on and remember smile times.. if not, surely we do those people an injustice by submerging wonderful times, moments, memories (You)

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

I believe that to be true Emma, sometimes there's a pull to sorrow and those memories are fleeting i.. read more

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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