Heart Flutters

Heart Flutters

A Poem by Frieda P

I've read many sad tunes
           written quite a few,
when my heart flutters
    through your life chapters 
       to reminisce your memories,
butterflies arouse to float on zephyrs
         easing the formlessness of my soul


© 2013 Frieda P


Author's Note

Frieda P
On a lighter note, the pic moved me to think of the lovely memories, even in death, they live on in our hearts.

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Hmm statistically it is shown that people tend to cling to their better memories no matter how horrendous that particular time period was I guess we were meant to be resilient when it's all said and done we all like to go back the old times whether good or bad to get a bit of Heart Flutters Great writing Frieda

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Always cling to the best ones, sometimes the other just shove their way in, thanks Deron.



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Can I be bold here my love and dare say this is my favourite piece from you, well done, a great read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Be bold my love, you like short & sweet, thank you....
A lullaby to soothe the tense, nonexistent spirit? I don't believe I've read anything quite similar to that, and it was indeed enticing. It reminds me that poetry in itself is nonexistent, and 'tis only our minds that assign the emotions necessary for our spirits to indulge in it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Indescribably jazzed by your review Tai, thanks so much.
yes lighter note, best to wave to the wind,and all it brings, then look back at all it took.....

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

You know lee it always depends on which way the those zephyrs take us....
lee von cleef

6 Years Ago

Far enough , and around, and then you are back where you were ,if wings can soar on a west wind long.. read more
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Let's hope the winds are generous....
Beautifully written... moving and packs an emotional punch !! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Grazie Debbie, hope it didn't hurt ;-)
Amen to this dear friend, the poem and the comment...the positive memories gain strength with the passing of time xo

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

7 Years Ago

It fluttered through me xo
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Woo, did that tickle? ;-P xo
kublakhan27

7 Years Ago

Haha yeah, I'm pathetically ticklish ;P xo
Love the picture of the butterflies! I like how you began. The last lines are sweet.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks Siren, glad you enjoyed it.
A breeze of a poem or a poem of a breeze. Either way superb.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

So jazzed by your sentiments here Ken.
This one is beautiful. The good memories will keep the pieces together as best we can and help us remember what it felt like to feel their love. Always.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

We try the best we can, thanks Kristin.
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Glad he is back home :) x

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much Tink! :-) x
:( Dear God, you actually have me crying now. Keep your chin up hun, I know this will bring back memories of your sister, but try think of all the happy times you had with her, think of everything on the bright side, you have the Cafe behind you, sweetheart. xoxo

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Awh noodlebumble that's s so sweet, thanks darling xo
s y e

7 Years Ago

Pleasure. xo

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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