Heart Flutters

Heart Flutters

A Poem by Frieda P

I've read many sad tunes
           written quite a few,
when my heart flutters
    through your life chapters 
       to reminisce your memories,
butterflies arouse to float on zephyrs
         easing the formlessness of my soul


© 2013 Frieda P


Author's Note

Frieda P
On a lighter note, the pic moved me to think of the lovely memories, even in death, they live on in our hearts.

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Hmm statistically it is shown that people tend to cling to their better memories no matter how horrendous that particular time period was I guess we were meant to be resilient when it's all said and done we all like to go back the old times whether good or bad to get a bit of Heart Flutters Great writing Frieda

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Always cling to the best ones, sometimes the other just shove their way in, thanks Deron.



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such a lovely peice...okay can you tell me how you got the butterflys on your page...love butterflys

Posted 7 Years Ago


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carol burgess romance

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Stella I have learned something new today
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Why is everybody calling me Stella, ha....
carol burgess romance

7 Years Ago

Maybe you look like a Stella lol...lets try again...thanks Frieda
familiar...thank you for sharing the photo that inspired your lighter side write

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thank you Renee, glad you enjoyed it, I loved that pic too.
The sweetness of memories can keep us afloat. Beautifully done, Frieda!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

I'll let Stella know. ;-) Thanks Angi!
Angi

7 Years Ago

Damn! I thought I caught it in time! Ha! Nicely done, Frieda dear!!!
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Ha, I've done it before myself, no problemo & thanks again!
Grief can take us down so far, and the only thing we can do to stay afloat is to bask in memories. There is a lightening in this write, and a gentle wisdom. Beautiful.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks Rita, those flutterbys were fighting me, but I got them to cooperate for a while anyway.
This is darling, love the butterfly, you have such a unique way with words.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Butterflies remind me of my sister, thanks r&b.
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Sweet and deeply touching

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks lynn, nice of you to visit.
... easing the formlessness of my soul...
And I'm sure there were many beautiful memories to relive in your mind. This was melancholy, yet still with that upliftedness in the reminder that there was beauty in this life that is no longer... And we should live this way while those we love are alive too... so we remember what is beautiful that we don't want to destroy...
A lovely one, Frieda.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Always appreciate your insightful reviews Horizon, thanks so much.
so short, so powerful...the reminiscing...

the loss.

jacob

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks jacob, much appreciate your sentiments.
oh, how gorgeous the imagery coming from these words is... i feel i should be whispering..

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Ha whispering around me, thanks for the lovely review Stella.
Stella Armour

7 Years Ago

you are most welcome... :o)
Keeping those memories alive in our heart is how we keep loved ones in heaven by our side on Earth. A really touching poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks Dale, yes sweet thoughts should always stay in our hearts.

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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