Heart Flutters

Heart Flutters

A Poem by Frieda P

I've read many sad tunes
           written quite a few,
when my heart flutters
    through your life chapters 
       to reminisce your memories,
butterflies arouse to float on zephyrs
         easing the formlessness of my soul


© 2013 Frieda P


Author's Note

Frieda P
On a lighter note, the pic moved me to think of the lovely memories, even in death, they live on in our hearts.

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Hmm statistically it is shown that people tend to cling to their better memories no matter how horrendous that particular time period was I guess we were meant to be resilient when it's all said and done we all like to go back the old times whether good or bad to get a bit of Heart Flutters Great writing Frieda

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Always cling to the best ones, sometimes the other just shove their way in, thanks Deron.



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But the poem is not as heavy as some you have penned. If memories evoke butterflies on zephyrs that is a recognition of the joy of having known someone you lost.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

John Alexander McFadyen

7 Years Ago

with his song.......................telling my life with his words, killing me softly with his song,.. read more
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Aren't you supposed to be tanning or something? ;-)
John Alexander McFadyen

7 Years Ago

yes off to catch the last rays!
"when my heart flutters
through your life chapters "
A lighter poem from all life's sad chapters on the positive outlook you are trying to grasp amid all your loss and pain. So your heart is trying to flutter like a butterfly trying to find a soft spot to land . Very nice as always...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thank you my friend, seems in times of grief we grab onto anything that will keep our heads above wa.. read more
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

Wow. That is so true...You are welcome...:)
Aww....such a sweet and deeply touching little piece to brighten a Sunday morning. Whatever you write its always taken to the full breadth of feeling. Nothing held back. Question...did you mean though or through in that 4th line? ;-)xo

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redflutterby

7 Years Ago

Your welcome sweet friend! You rarely make mistakes so wasn't sure. Beautiful poem....glad you are a.. read more
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

I kept changing my mind from 'within' to through, you know a little bit of confusion and there ya go.. read more
redflutterby

7 Years Ago

;-)xo
Indeed, as long as we keep the good memories to the front on our minds, the bad will eventually fade and almost disappear...almost, because to completely disappear will never happen, as long as the love felt still lives. Very good Frieda, very beautiful and very you.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

You know Jack, losing my dear friend brings me to think of the loss of my sister too, trying not to .. read more
Jack...

7 Years Ago

Frieda, so many good memories wait for you on the horizon as well...look forward while looking behin.. read more

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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