~But a Dreamy Whisper...

  

     i had a lovely dream

                          or was it a dream?

            feelings still linger like hot fiery ice

    i am certain you touched my face

            caressed my heart,

      held my hand

    thought i caught a glimpse of you

                 out of the corner of my eye

    chalked it up to wishful thinking

                                and lunatic ravings,

      the next moment,

 
​              the gentlest breeze,

      a fragrance remembered so well,

                 a discernible whisper in my ear,

             and I noticed there, tucked at the nape of my neck

                            wildflowers in my hair

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

" the gentlest breeze,
a fragrance remembered so well,


a discernible whisper in my ear,"
I'm so glad you are dreaming some nice dreams for a change among all life's troubles and aches. We need them to refresh our souls and give us hope...Bravo...:)

[Frieda P]

For a change, whatever do you mean Sami? ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[Blue Ivory]

Wet dreaming I see ;)
Lol for some reason, the topic of dreams about the perfect guy has been surrounding me lately.
This is so deep and romantic! Dreams like these always feel so realistic. Wish that last part would really happen!

[Frieda P]

Ha, one track mind, you. ;-)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I like the story and the ending. A gentle touch of a wildflower can make us fall back to good memories and places. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Wildflowers are my favorite, thanks Coyote.

[Pete Langley]

Good memories are like the veins in Gorgonzola cheese...they invade every compartment of our subconscious....and erupt on the surface when we least expect. Love this, sweetheart. P.

[Frieda P]

Ha that's an odd way of looking at it but yes, you're right..thanks so much Pete x