~But a Dreamy Whisper...

~But a Dreamy Whisper...

A Poem by Frieda P

  
     i had a lovely dream

                          or was it a dream?

            feelings still linger like hot fiery ice

    i am certain you touched my face

            caressed my heart,

      held my hand

    thought i caught a glimpse of you
                 out of the corner of my eye

    chalked it up to wishful thinking
                                and lunatic ravings,

      the next moment,
 
​              the gentlest breeze,
      a fragrance remembered so well,


                 a discernible whisper in my ear,

             and I noticed there, tucked at the nape of my neck

                            wildflowers in my hair



© 2013 Frieda P


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" the gentlest breeze,
a fragrance remembered so well,


a discernible whisper in my ear,"
I'm so glad you are dreaming some nice dreams for a change among all life's troubles and aches. We need them to refresh our souls and give us hope...Bravo...:)


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

For a change, whatever do you mean Sami? ;-)
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

^^~^^ :)



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Dreamy, misty whispers in the night. Love these kinds of encounters or were they visions? Huh. Better ask my husband what happened last night. This made me think of those sleepy romps in the middle of the night, sometimes those are the best connections of all. Thank you for triggering these lovely memories, Frieda! Angi~

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Umm, your romps sound better than my dreams Angi! Thank you muchly
Now, let me talk to hubby.. read more
I love the dreams that feel real. They stay with you and when you wake up you think was that a dream? I had a dream like that, the other night. It'll come true a week today ;-) Woo.

Amazing write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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s y e

7 Years Ago

Haha, I'm doing it too! Even more so on the day! x
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

YAY, well between us we have two good legs anyway ;-)
s y e

7 Years Ago

Ahahaaa, yes we do ;-P
Lovers dream. Nice

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks Mark.
Aren't those dreams grand! The ones that feel so real that you wake just knowing it was more than a dream - they feel like a connection through distance, magic. A beautiful poem!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

I love when the good ones stay with you, thanks so much Sera!
Oh gah, this is great. It's almost palpable. Very beautiful, Frieda P. The beauty of a dream, aint it? Everything is almost possible.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Oh gah, I love your review! ;-)
oh no!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

what no romance
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poetry-kiddo alienbaba

7 Years Ago

just milk and buns
Love it Frieda, that bit about "hot fiery ice" seemed so perfect. I was scratching my head to imagine what it might be, and realized you had created the feeling inside of me that you were describing of something that seems to be, but probably isn't anything but " wishful thinking and lunatic ravings,". Great one.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Astro

7 Years Ago

Aieeee!
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Now that hardly needs translating!
Astro

7 Years Ago

lol
A beautiful poem full of sentiment and lingering reminders. There are always moments that feel so real, make you wonder, "am I dreaming? Could this be more than a memory?" Really like this one Frieda. Thanks for sharing. It brought a warm smile to my face. In darkness there is always light, you just have to know where to look.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

A warm smile is more than I could ask for, thanks so much Kristin.
i've heard that same whisper

sometimes . . .

you described it so well

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Great, when it happens that way, thanks Emily...
Ah they will comb out, but do it real slow....


Now this is written to impress , some one should take you down town. I red you had the heals to show off.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Ha lee, only you would combine the two....

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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