Clear Moon Haiku

Clear Moon Haiku

A Poem by Frieda P

where does one find hope

 look to the clear moon above

stars bounce back at you


© 2013 Frieda P


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This was nice my friend. I often find the solace I seek in the evening sky. I watch the moon and the stars on their travels each night and wonder to myself, who else might be doing the same. It is in these skies that I find hope through the reassurance that night after night they appear regardless of where my life is heading. Your poety as always so very beautiful. Loved this

Posted 6 Years Ago


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WOW! Frieda - this is great. How many generations have did the same - looked to the heavens at night and felt that longing, that hope and that connection with the ancestors past and future?

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Posted 6 Years Ago


It's in the stars...hope...that's what wishes are for....
This is a dreamy Senryu, Friedalicious! just lovely...~xoxo~

Posted 6 Years Ago


The moon and stars are universal jewels - there is a beauty, a calm, and a hope in gazing at them. Lovely haiku!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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I often find myself looking up to the night~time sky when I am frantic over something. Angi~

Posted 6 Years Ago


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ANTO

6 Years Ago

Freida Rita, Angi, Noodle et al. You are my Moon buddies. I lost count of the many times I stared at.. read more
Awwwww!!! The moon! You know I love the Moon, it's my bestest friend in the whole wide world. I always sit at the window when the moon is close and sing Billy Moon, haha. It's a childhood thing. :P This was amazing, Pickles. Great job.

~ Noodle. ❤

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Lovely haiku, Frieda.. I like that one can find hope in the moon and stars.. much like wishing on a falling star. I dabble with astrology and often find that the positions of the moon and the stars have significant influence on my life.. wonderful job with this one.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Lovely...moon rays and star rays...bright strands of hope...

Posted 6 Years Ago


Do we really need to fear reaching so high? Yes, the moon is closer, but it only reflects the hope generated elsewhere... I think reflection is a fine reminder hope lives.
I will have to give some thought to where I would look to find the source...
Provoking.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Beautiful and calm indeed-soothing Write!!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


And me snarky still, I thought those were gnats.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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