Entrance'd Reverie

Entrance'd Reverie

A Poem by Frieda P


You light my path
                 with orchid sunlight

in your voice 
                I hear the melody of angels

         as wildflowers dance to the harmony
    of countryside's waterfall
        crystalline air
butterfly musings fancy
           the bewitching sprays 

you are the starry trance
                  of a sun kissed sky,
       whilst moonlit passages make me sigh

 cream in my coffee, 
                the 'good' in morning

you put the glint of 
                   smiles in my eyes

~exquisite reverie that
             takes my breath away~








© 2013 Frieda P


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10 Years Ago

You are a complete and utter a*****e!! First of all I've already blocked you so don't bother trying .. read more

You light my path
with orchid sunlight

A lovely write...and I especially loved the above line...Enjoyed frieda...Rose

Posted 10 Years Ago


The "good" in morning... simple and sweet. You present here an easygoing love song in this piece.

"you are the starry trance of a sun kissed sky, whilst moonlit passages make me sigh..." Sun and moon, all consuming devotion... and the cream in my coffee - your poem runs the gamut of affection in all of its facets. Well done, Frieda!

Posted 10 Years Ago


"you are the starry trance
of a sun kissed sky,
whilst moonlit passages make me sigh"
A beautiful poem with a lot of magical descriptions...Always with a creative pen...:)


Posted 10 Years Ago



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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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