~to the Moon & Back

In my heart of discontent

where remembrances lie

dandelion & butterfly raindrops

land upon my face

streaming in memories

fragile recollections of a better place

wafting through the air

into the atmosphere

on a wing and a prayer

looking for a sign

are you here with me still

within the magic of a flutterby

I sigh a dandelion's breath

dancing spirals grace a zephyr

gently drifting to the clouds

made a wish upon a star,

                   they make it that far

for our essence to meet

halfway between

 the moon & back

Author's Note

~reminder of what Lee used to say to me all the time, except she added Big Sis.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Your poetry is getting better and better. I hope to buy your poetry book one day and add it to my favorite. I like the flow of thoughts and how you used the language. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Wow John, you humble me with your kind words, thank you so much.

[Kleio13]

damn passionate. You never stop!

[Frieda P]

Ha Kleio, thanks..............!

[s y e]

You know my heart is always with you, and when you talk about your sister, I know how you feel... I know loads of people say this and they won't truly know until it happens but when you lose someone close, you know. And you're a great person, she's always watching you and probably still saying it to you, telling you to be less stubborn, too. You're a great big sister, she's always with you, in your heart and you're still in hers. Always will be.

[Frieda P]

Awh noodlebumble, thanks for this sweet response, I know....and you better get back here soon, you don't want to break my heart too....x

[s y e]

You know I'd never do that to you, honey. xoxo

[Frieda P]

I'm counting on it...........xo

[s y e]

You know fine well I'll be back soon. :-) xo

[Sanober]

"for our essence to meet
halfway between
the moon & back"
A really exquisite poem filled with a gentle yearning. The imagery swept me away. Beautifully written!

[Frieda P]

Muchly appreciate your kind words Sanober, thank you!

[Corset]

I lost a sister as well, a mother, a poor sad excuse for a father, (thank goodness for foster parents) a lover, two grandpas, one grandmother, a child, and all I can say to you is... I don't know, but I'd like to think so, I think after a time they do get to chose what location to serve, I think they do get to come back and watch over us if that's what they wish to do, my beliefs only...but I hope it comforts somehow. This is beautiful Frieda.

[Frieda P]

So sorry Corset, that's a whole lotta loss, I hope you're right, I would love to believe that, thanks so much for sharing, I do so appreciate it...x

[Corset]

:)I know it doesn't help but ..x

[Frieda P]

No actually it does, in some weird comforting way......x

[Corset]

I'm truly glad for that Pickle :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is endearing and touches my heart... the flutter of thoughts hurt and yet, keeps her memory alive and glowing.... I say that all the time to my Sis and Eli... Means so much!

Thank you for sharing this heartfelt piece.~xoxo~

Btw, Love ya..."to the moon and back".. :)

[Frieda P]

Awh sweetie, I love you to the moon & back too! Thanks for your lovely review Robbiesugar ;-) xoxox

[Tate Morgan]

I see this as a plea to god for assurance you are not alone in your sufferings.

[Frieda P]

Thanks for your thoughts here Tate....

[Glen Yumang Manese]

What is with the moon tonight...all of you are requesting reads on the subject...I just previewed Butterfly's work and yours earlier...of course...both different...but about the moon...thanks for the invite...

[Frieda P]

I think the moon inspires many of us, thanks Glen...

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I have one that I put in the cutting room floor...may be I will revive the verse...for now that's where it resides...too abstract a poem...and I had to humble myself and deplete 8000 words...from the 40000 words count for the book of verses...I just moved on and not look behind me...but forward...

[Tom]

Beautiful sentiments conveyed through beautiful words!

An inspiring poem !

[Frieda P]

Thanks muchly Tom, jazzed you enjoyed!

[Justaguy]

A very touching moment, I am sure. Sounds like thoughts that truly come from the heart. Memories are wonderful things, because we can pick and choose the ones we want to carry with us. Well done!

[Frieda P]

Thanks Ron, bittersweet memories oft times...glad you enjoyed this one.

[Dr. Wood ?]

I do not know the ins and outs of your tragedy...I still wish you well in your future...This was a very sweet poem and considering the circumstances..Very moving.....Be Happy

[Frieda P]

Thanks Dave, muchly appreciate the sentiment.....