'Still'...

If the sun were to set in your eyes

as the moon settled over my soul 

falling to the depths of an ocean's mile

I'd 'still' remember how you made me feel

& everyday that ends in why I'll miss you

Reviews

[Jack...]

Five lines...that's all it took for you to touch my heart with this poem. We all miss people and it affects all of us in different ways...but when the missing is constant and how they made you feel is only found in memories, then the sadness is a pain we only wish we could miss. Frieda, you are an amazing poet and I am so thrilled I have the opportunity to read you and call you friend.

[Frieda P]

You've truly touched my heart, this one apparently wrote itself, I had a high temp and when I awoke, it was sitting in my notepad, obviously never far from my mind, thanks for your kind heart and being such a good friend always Jack...x

[Dye]

Got a little teary eyed reading this one. You have such a beautiful heart Frieda, it really shines through in everything you write. This was very touching with the butterflies fluttering by and without music (in my opinion). It really says a lot.

[Frieda P]

Awh you're so sweet to say Dye, thanks so much :-)

[Pryde Foltz]

Winsome grin on my face. Oh if that feeling could truly be bottled, but then still it lack the warmth. Great one, Frieda. And yes, you are getting a hundred. lol.

[Frieda P]

Ha wooo to both Pryde, thanks for your gracious review. :-)