...and then you touched me

...and then you touched me

A Poem by Frieda P

........and then you touched me
not in the usual fashion,
but deep within my soul's fancy
a fondling embrace that took flight
clutch'd and pique'd every relevant moment thereafter
life would forever be changed         yet
most everything stayed the same
except for deep within the recesses of time
breath stood still and the imprint within my heart,
lasting well beyond a lifetime of  endlessness 
still just a mere drop of water in an infinite sea
oftentimes, especially when it rains blissfully
i think of how you enveloped me for perpetuity 

© 2013 Frieda P


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Frieda P

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It is interesting how that one touch - perhaps fleeting - can stay with us forever...

Your poem reminds me of the first time my daughter wrapped her tiny hand around my finger and I knew nothing would ever feel like that again...nothing would ever be the same.

A beautiful poem my friend. You have touched my heart with this one.

:) Julie

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Awh what a sweet memory, exactly Julie, thanks so much! :-)



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That one special touch can be wonders for ones beginnings. Sending them beyond the usual nothing. Wonderful piece, so 'touching'.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ha thanks BlackRose, I can't believe you're the first one that used that. ;-)
BlackRose

10 Years Ago

Well you know me so far. What will I do with myself, ha. ;o) Your welcome.
Exceptional poem..the words touched and clung on to my soul.Great job.:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks muchly Talesha, jazz'd you enjoyed. :-)
Hugh this is the one I saw and wanted to see. Looks like I been here before.. Oh well just as beautiful the second time around :-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ric's hot baby buns
in clear view of Connie too
y'all run for cover ;-P haha
Cryingkate

10 Years Ago

Hey .. It's all innocent.. I'm old now but I can look :-)
Cryingkate

10 Years Ago

At my age I don't want Flowers I want Hot Baby Buns added to the family wall portraits..
It is interesting how that one touch - perhaps fleeting - can stay with us forever...

Your poem reminds me of the first time my daughter wrapped her tiny hand around my finger and I knew nothing would ever feel like that again...nothing would ever be the same.

A beautiful poem my friend. You have touched my heart with this one.

:) Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Awh what a sweet memory, exactly Julie, thanks so much! :-)
some touches we feel long after the physical touch is gone...the imprint stays on our hearts forever.

beautiful, simply beautiful.

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much jacob, appreciate your kind words.
What an enjoyable read, this is really lovely.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Grazie mille r&b.
This is simply divine - all your writes are but this one jumps out at me. I loved this one... loved the wording and imagery.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks a bunch noodebumble, YOU'VE touched me...thanks luv! xo
I relate to this. Tis how it is - if we are lucky.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

So true, thanks Orlando.
R J Askew

10 Years Ago

My pleasure. May the words flow well in 2014 for you.
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

For us all, thanks...have a great New Year. :-)
Beautiful, A poem to heal your hearts and to mend your souls.. thank you for sharing.

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your visit and kind words Sibt.
especially when it rains blissfully
i think of how you enveloped me for perpetuity...

An especially beautiful end to a spectacular poem, Frieda.


Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind words Rita, jazz'd you enjoyed. Have a great New Year!

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