~Flutterby Essence

~Flutterby Essence

A Poem by Frieda P
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Lee~I miss you with my whole heart ♥

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I released my love unto the skies
whence you flew above this sphere
to abysmal eternity's depths
wistful butterfly's free'd soul
aching for peaceful serenity
I cried blood tears
in your journey's flight
an affecting departure
to otherworldly heights,
your essence remains 
the fluttering of my heart

© 2014 Frieda P


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Frieda, your pain, the ache in your heart reaches out from this poem and touches me as I'm sure it will everyone who stops by. I personally know the love you hold for your sister and how you miss her so very much. All I can say is I know that if she is able to see your beautiful poetry she is so very proud of you. You fortunately have the ability to find her essence in every wonderful butterfly you see and that beauty will always be yours to keep. You never cease to amaze me with your wonderful poetry, even if the subject is sadness and missing someone so very dear to your heart.



Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks Jack, your words touch my heart. Some days are just worse than others, always appreciate you.. read more



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I can relate to these wonderfuly penned feelings. Thanks for sharing. No words.

Posted 9 Years Ago


A sad and beautiful poem. We need to remember the good people we shared time and life with. Thank you for sharing the poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sadness in this poem is immense, I know your sister is happy where she is. Wonder tribute to her

Posted 10 Years Ago


Heartfelt emotional words to pluck my heartstrings. Your word choice shows strength even though the meaning behind this is painful. Keep flying, butterfly. Good write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind words jenn, always flying.........
Frieda, you hold my tears right now, the pain your feeling is all too relatable. This made my heart ache even more. I know how much you loved your sister and how she was your world and I know, in fact, we all know that you miss her everyday. I know that she will be looking down so, so proud of the beautiful woman you are. The kind, caring, gorgeous lady you've turned into. She's your own personal guardian angel. And the love you two share, is completely unique.

Beautiful, like i said, you own my tears. xoxo

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Awh Sye, you made my day little noodlebumble, thanks so much for your sweet words, I hope she knows... read more
s y e

10 Years Ago

She knows, Mama F, she knows....
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

I'm so glad you made it in here, smiling. :-)
The heartache in this poem is overwhelming. You will never stop mourning for your sister and the sorrow will be part of you forevermore. Butterflies are very important to me too, Frieda....and their beauty is a sign of how beautiful your relationship was with your sister. May sweet memories comfort you on the bad days. This poem is heartfelt and beautifully written with the ink of tears. Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks Lydi, your kind words are much appreciated. I know, butterflies affect you too. x
Frieda, your pain, the ache in your heart reaches out from this poem and touches me as I'm sure it will everyone who stops by. I personally know the love you hold for your sister and how you miss her so very much. All I can say is I know that if she is able to see your beautiful poetry she is so very proud of you. You fortunately have the ability to find her essence in every wonderful butterfly you see and that beauty will always be yours to keep. You never cease to amaze me with your wonderful poetry, even if the subject is sadness and missing someone so very dear to your heart.



Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks Jack, your words touch my heart. Some days are just worse than others, always appreciate you.. read more

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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