~random lunatic's entropy

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Pondering

 on exiled brain matter,

casting out

 the gray'd elements

phenomenons

 of anomaly's occurrence

which constitutes

 a sluggish protoplasm

rhyme in time

 to save essential aspects,

bird's eye view

 blinded within technicalities,

stifled screehing parrot's

 escape clause parody

lunatic breaks the dam

 in heady implosions

floundering upon the

 flippant bay of random entropy

Author's Note

Bird Woman Drawing by Bridget McAlonan

Reviews

[Jack...]

Huh? My sweet friend, your mind this morning is not unlike an amusement park fun house, twisting and turning corridors, flashing colored lights, something hiding in each corner ready to jump out yelling, "Boo, got'cha!" Well this one got me, not too scared though, I could smell the faint aroma of poppies wafting through the darkness...made me feel safe.

Another stellar - out of this world poetic adventure with you Frieda. Always a trip on a ghost town kind of day.

[Frieda P]

Ha Jack, you always bring a smile to my face. "the faint aroma of poppies wafting through the darkness" Priceless!! ;-)

[Brittany Zedalis]

Love the music, picture, and poem. Wicked.

[Frieda P]

I love that word 'wicked', yes, the lunatic was in my head. Thanks again Brittany. ;-)

[Shaquana Adams]

"bird's eye view
blinded within technicalities,"

Clever word usage. Well done :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks Shaquana, jazz'd you enjoyed. :-)

[junaid altaf]

full of wobbling concepts
well composed

[Frieda P]

Wobbling concepts live in my head, thanks junaid....

[junaid altaf]

same here toooo...welcome frieda

[Frieda P]

Long time no see, where you been hiding?

[junaid altaf]

i had a real bad time,,,,,i was diagnose with bi polar, ocd and hyperactivity.....i even thought of quiting studies....but now i m more than fine...

[Sami Khalil]

We hide our lunatics upon the dark side of the moon to hide the reality that so many humans can be insane . We close the doors behind our fears and then throw the keys as if they went away. We start distrusting our senses and fall into the traps of mind games...Another creative and true take on lunatics...Bravo.............

[Frieda P]

So so many, yes....there's no keys for this kind of daftness Sami, you should know that. ;-) Grazie mille my friend...............

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:)....................

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, that bird's eye view that gets a but blurrier as we fly into our autumn...

very clever imagery incites the reader's sense of change...

[Frieda P]

Awh and I used to like autumn, thanks jacob....

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Wow, you must have peeked inside my sleepless mind this morning!

[Frieda P]

Ha sorry to hear....like minds, not so hot in this state of mind! Have more coffee. ;-) Grazie mille Travis.

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

I don't drink it. What do I do now? :(