~Translucent Renditions

Mesmerized by your emblazoned words, 

   enchanted within your eye's opalesce glints

  your alluring demeanor entices my aching heart

you are the lavender skies pierce'd with apricot diamonds,

  impetus 

zephyrs that transcend me to scintillating destinations

   riveted in your every echo'd illuminating flicker

the intensity in your raging winds never ceases

  enthralled in your fervent thunder intensifying ocean depths

 my spirit is elevated to new heights in flight'd chimera

carried away in rendition's cast vapors your dimensions provoke,

  translucent peaceful renderings within stellar light's tranquility 

forever surrendering in the intense flames that dance unto my soul

Author's Note

Reviews

[Jack...]

As if standing in the garden waiting for that perfect rose to bloom and before my eyes it appears and it is so much more beautiful than I could have ever imagined. The bouquet of your words my sweet friend is more fragrant, melodically tinted and filled with all of the magic of nature dreams. When you conceive an idea, it forms inside of you, it grows and them it blooms. Soft petals wrap around this dancing poetic score. Lighter than air, as rose petals on a whispering breeze, fliting about like happy butterflies, your poerty is this.

Beautiful frieda...simply beautiful

[Frieda P]

Sigh Jack, there's poetry in your words always, I think you should pen this review. Thanks for the song suggestion, it really suits this one perfectly. Your words kiss my heart in a huge smile my sweet friend. x

[R. L. Hill]

I don't typically comment in others' reviews, but dang, Jack. Love it ^^ lol

[R. L. Hill]

"you are the lavender skies pierce'd with apricot diamonds"

[Frieda P]

Thanks Quirk, no one has ever told me that before ;-) Don't you just want to twirl around to this music?..........

[R. L. Hill]

I can't hear the music unfortunately...And this bubble didn't post my whole review. I just stated that that was my favorite line! It bursts with imagery that I think you captured so well throughout the whole poem...But for some reason, that one particular line slapped me in the face and I liked it. Do it again. Lol.

[Frieda P]

Ha with the same line, or shall I slap you with a new one? ;-) haha And thanks so much....

[Frieda P]

It's Earth, Wind & Fire's Fantasy by the way...

[R. L. Hill]

Oh awesome. Well that fits ^_^

[Pryde Foltz]

my spirit is elevated to new heights in flight'd chimera
carried away in rendition's cast vapors your dimensions provoke,

Such masterful imagery, Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Pryde, I missed this one, sorry....

[Rita L. Sev]

Ethereal imagery here, crafted from excellent word choices - I love the flowing vocabulary in this one, Frieda!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Rita, can you tell I was in a good mood that day? :-)

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words. I had to read twice. The description was alive and beautiful. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much 2x's Coyote, so nice of you to say my friend.

[Tai Ryens]

Again, seeing a lover in the environment that you indulge in seems to be a reasonably common concept in your poetry, and it never ceases to amaze me. Your descriptions make it seem as if that love is inescapable, and that's a GOOD thing, because all there is is beauty surrounding. Well done, I quite liked this.

[Frieda P]

I have a vivid imagination, if only love could be as such, thanks so much Tai, always appreciate your thoughts.

[Avinash]

Where do you get all these beautiful pearls and then make them into a beautiful garland in the form of your poems.. you are gifted :)

[Frieda P]

Ha you're too cute Avinash, this was a good day, have to take advantage of those positive notes. ;-) Thanks so much my friend.

[Ruth]

You know, I read you and think of so many responses and yet, my fingers hover and all I can say is a HUGE wow...sigh, just damn beautiful love, your poetry always blooms a radiant hue xx

[Frieda P]

Woo Poppy, doing the happy dance to your review, thanks muchly luv! xo

[Chandradhish Ghosh]

Brilliant imagery in your words as always Freida...however I have one question...I found two things a little contradicting " impetus zephyrs that transcend me to scintillating destinations" and "the intensity in your raging winds never ceases". In the first instance you talk about a zephyr and in the second you walk about raging wind...do you mean different effects in two different circumstances? My favourite line "you are the lavender skies pierce'd with apricot diamonds." Brilliant!

[Frieda P]

Yes, I was trying to show the different dimensions, I actually had poetry in mind when I wrote this one, has all kinds of temperatures and climate, thanks so much, I think that's my favorite line too. :-)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

WOW another stunning poem. :) :D

Kaze~

[Frieda P]

Jazz'd you enjoyed Kazie :-)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your welcome. ^_^