Close My Eyes~

Close My Eyes~

A Poem by Frieda P
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a wee love scribble

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I close my eyes when you speak
your wistful words a nectar'd lullaby
my safe haven amidst the stars,
I dance on moonbeam's shine,
 heart skips to your rhythmic tune
'never have to cry'
reigning in melodies of sweet harmony
my world's a better place,

and I owe it all to you...

© 2014 Frieda P


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// my safe haven amidst the stars,
I dance on moonbeams shine
my heart skips to your rhythmic tune //

Definitely a safe haven Frieda - this is simply divine. You have such lovely lines here. I loved how you said my safe haven, that put a massive smile on my face because that is how I feel when I read your wonderful poetry.

Such a beautiful, romantic poem. And the music is just perfect, Michael is a great singer, I love him.

A huge sigh, flip flops & all that jazz! x

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Awh thanks sweetie, must be where I got it from. ;-) Huge sigh....woooooooooo! MWAH xo



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"heart skips to your rhythmic tune

'never have to cry'

reigning in melodies of sweet harmony

my world's a better place,"

My favorite part. A short poem but lovely in every sentence,

Posted 10 Years Ago


It is nice when you have this feeling about someone.That they will always be there for you :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

If I remember correctly, yep. ;-) Thanks so much Vidya.
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
No, you should never have to cry Mrs.R, not when you can pen such irresistible cries from the heart...should this piece be addressed to someone, I envy him. Nobody does nectar'd lullabies like you my dear ;) xo

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

It's addressed to my poetic sweetheart, thanks Benji, muchly appreciated. ;-)
kublakhan27

10 Years Ago

You know it's a pleasure Mrs. R ;)
awwww...this is extremely beautiful. I loved enjoyed it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Cassie, you just put a huge smile on my face this early morning.
Simply Beautiful........

Trace

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thank you Trace, glad you enjoyed...
Frieda your very nice words of truth and fair voice for this poem I sincerely congratulate

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much, glad you enjoyed.
Frieda does it again! Words effortlessly flowing in gentle cascades....

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Awh what a sweet thing to say sweetbind, thanks so much....
Awe Frieda....you are quite the Romantic....sweet and lovely....perfectly chosen blend of a few words spoke volumes here. I loved it....=)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Awh thanks so my friend, sometimes I can be sweet too. ;-) Grazie mille!
Night

10 Years Ago

My pleasure.....-)
Powerful words in lovers limbs:) Awesome and special when all is due:) Great lines dear friend:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Jon. :-)
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10 Years Ago

Your very welcome;-)
A beautiful little love scribble for the one you love...
I love the last line (sigh) so lovely!

:) Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Coming from the queen of love scribbles I"m honored Julie! ;-)

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