~Mystical Yearnings

~Mystical Yearnings

A Poem by Frieda P


I loved you 'fore the beginning of time
mystical yearnings captivated my soul
endless longing of passion and tenderness's absolute rapture,
intoxicated in love's sweet cherry wine  
senseless I dance in  whirling euphoria
my existence lies in the spirit of heart
let me be your moonlight eager to glimmer
the flower garden of thorn-less rose's bliss
power of wildflowers surrender to the sun,
beyond the starry night, void of space
transcending all earthly joys
an aura of splendiferous grace & adoration
fiery sacred honorings tormenting skies
hungering for your taste of passion
drunk in the inhalations of your ecstasy

© 2014 Frieda P


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Splendiferous, now there is an adjective... and it describes perfectly the mythical, magical, wildflower surrender of this poem.. and you "had me at, "I loved you 'fore the beginning of time", Frieda... and then you went on to moonbeams and thorneless roses and .. and... well, HELP Frieda cause I am lost in your "ecstasy"... mind if I stay here awhile?? don't think I want to be found... have I mention'd how much I am enjoying your poem Frieda... just in case you haven't noticed, I AM!!! ;o) oh my.. "splendiferous!!!"


Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Gawd you should see the huge smile on my face curt, stay as long as you wish....we're serving vino i.. read more



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A love existing not only in the physical expressions of it, but also as an essence of the spirit that transcends all and is older than time itself . . . Well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Grazie mille Tai.
my existence lies in the spirit of heart
let me be your moonlight eager to glimmer
the flower garden of thorn-less rose's bliss
power of wildflowers surrender to the sun,

Very beautiful write, Frieda.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks Pryde.
You know Frieda, this felt less mystical and more like a dream come true.
Then again, life is a mystery... and love is the nectar of the mystics.
A lovely thought and a believable dream.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

RAWR...ha, you know the only thing I like about you guys is the Lidocaine .... ;-)
 David Scott

7 Years Ago

I thought it was the nitrous...
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

I get my happy drunk on elsewhere......

Superb starting line: "I loved you 'fore the beginning of time..."
Fantasy and ecstasy...this is perfect!


Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Grazie mille Dhaye!
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

........... =)
Every single line is a poem in and of itself. My favorite? "Senseless I dance in whirling euphoria". This is a great write Frieda! My absolute favorite of your poems so far.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Woo, doing the happy dance stargazer, thanks so much.
This has got to be one of my favorites from you, dear Frieda. Amazing. :]

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Oh wow, you made my night Brittany, thanks so much! :-)
Brittany Zedalis

7 Years Ago

You're very welcome :]
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

I just wish I knew what the heck she was singing but it sounded good to me- ;-)
Surreality!

Love it! You always do this just so perfectly! This one was so worth reading that I read it again!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Woo, good to know, two reads makes me do the happy dance! Thanks Katherine, jazz'd you liked this o.. read more
Katherine R.

7 Years Ago

Happy dances, Yay!
// hungering for your taste of passion
drunk in the inhalations of your ecstasy //

Isn't it funny how both my favourite poets on this site are both totally romantics? ;-) You know who I'm talking about... I loved this one, I know that if anyone said anything like this to me they would have my heart in a heartbeat, haha. This has me sitting here sighing, praying and wishing.....

I love reading your beautiful, sweet words. Makes me smile... my safe haven as you know. :-)

Flip flops & all that jazz! x

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

I think we all pray we can achieve this nirvana one day, and that it lasts...thanks little noodlebum.. read more
This one is very flowery.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

You always say the nicest things Mark.
Mark

7 Years Ago

I don't wanna be 'd again. :P
The last line really drives this one home for me...I would never want to sober from the wine that ferments in your pool or ecstasy. A bed of thorn-less roses changes everything...perhaps the odd thorn in my skin would be a cue to take the twitches and come for your healing in the quiver of carnal spontaneity. A bed free of thorns is an invitation to savour, to give in to the slight tickles of petals against my back and take out the playfulness on whatever elements of your serene frame that catch my eyes first. Alright, so I'm getting carried away, but it's in the words Mrs.R...your knack for poetic sensuality knows no bounds ;) xo

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Wooo Benji, I like your review better than my poem, blew Mrs R's skirt right up! Thanks so much swe.. read more
kublakhan27

7 Years Ago

Haha Your reviews often do the same for me love...sometimes I spend more times reading your reviews .. read more

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