~Mystical Yearnings

~Mystical Yearnings

A Poem by Frieda P


I loved you 'fore the beginning of time
mystical yearnings captivated my soul
endless longing of passion and tenderness's absolute rapture,
intoxicated in love's sweet cherry wine  
senseless I dance in  whirling euphoria
my existence lies in the spirit of heart
let me be your moonlight eager to glimmer
the flower garden of thorn-less rose's bliss
power of wildflowers surrender to the sun,
beyond the starry night, void of space
transcending all earthly joys
an aura of splendiferous grace & adoration
fiery sacred honorings tormenting skies
hungering for your taste of passion
drunk in the inhalations of your ecstasy

© 2014 Frieda P


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Splendiferous, now there is an adjective... and it describes perfectly the mythical, magical, wildflower surrender of this poem.. and you "had me at, "I loved you 'fore the beginning of time", Frieda... and then you went on to moonbeams and thorneless roses and .. and... well, HELP Frieda cause I am lost in your "ecstasy"... mind if I stay here awhile?? don't think I want to be found... have I mention'd how much I am enjoying your poem Frieda... just in case you haven't noticed, I AM!!! ;o) oh my.. "splendiferous!!!"


Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Gawd you should see the huge smile on my face curt, stay as long as you wish....we're serving vino i.. read more



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Splendiferous, now there is an adjective... and it describes perfectly the mythical, magical, wildflower surrender of this poem.. and you "had me at, "I loved you 'fore the beginning of time", Frieda... and then you went on to moonbeams and thorneless roses and .. and... well, HELP Frieda cause I am lost in your "ecstasy"... mind if I stay here awhile?? don't think I want to be found... have I mention'd how much I am enjoying your poem Frieda... just in case you haven't noticed, I AM!!! ;o) oh my.. "splendiferous!!!"


Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Gawd you should see the huge smile on my face curt, stay as long as you wish....we're serving vino i.. read more
ALMOST LIKE A GREETING FOR A SPECIAL SOMEONE, BUT MUCH MORE REPRESENTED HERE~

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks Josie, glad you enjoyed.
Josie E. Cook M. A.

7 Years Ago

U R WELCOME! :)
Ohhhh la la!!

Is it too early to drink wine??...I believe I am intoxicated this morning! (he he)

What a build of euphoria.... Damn, Friedalicious! I haven't had breakfast yet.. ;)
You are a luscious writer, indeed!

Love this!~xoxoxo~ :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Never, you can drink vino for breakfast! Thanks, jazz'd you enjoy'd this one, I wish I knew what the.. read more
Ugh. How do you do this??? Seriously, the words just flowed so effortlessly. This poem is addicting in the best sense because the love portrayed feels real and that sense of heady emotion is intoxicating. This is just so beautiful. "I loved you 'fore the beginning of time/mystical yearnings captivated my soul" This first line seals my fate for adoration of this poem. It relays a moment of destiny where you know that your soul is meant to dance with his. It was laid out for you both in the stars before time. Favorite of yours thus far.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Indeed you did, actually giggled a bit too ;-)
R. L. Hill

7 Years Ago

:O I feel honored, oh giggly one
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

;-D
Englishly speaking, bravo. As for the subject matter, well, it is so lovely for someone to be able to feel that way.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

I only write them KL, doesn't mean I know ftw I'm talking about ;-)
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If a lady yearned for me in a way your poem describes, I think that's when i'd know what true love feels like. You make the idea of love seem so beautiful, even more than it is. If I want to learn how to re-feel anything again I just need to come to your poetry, it sets the essence of everything a man needs to know about loving a woman. Amazing write

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

What an utterly sweet sentiment BCE, thanks muchly, you made my day.
I have felt the Sufi mystic charm in your lovely and romantic write. Excellent whirling of emotions...The dance of ecstacy in a wonderful poetic form...:)....................

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

Hahaha...You are welcome...:).................
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

;-)
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

^^~^^ :>)...........................
Every man's dream waiting anxiuosly to come true. The thoughts they would tell let alone ignited into realism. Filled with such beauty and grace and fermented on every man's mind, haha. ;o)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks BlackRose, 'fermented' now there's a word. ;-)
A splendid surrender...
Lovely choice of delicate and tender words to impart your desire.
Very pretty.

Admiration.
Scott

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks muchly Scott, jazz'd you enjoyed.
Scott Metro

7 Years Ago

:)
Scotty..
Well, what can I say...there are 1000's of men out there, myself included that would give anything to have a beautiful woman like you say these words to them. Frieda, when you write about love, it is truly love. Pure, sweet, fragrant love. SIGH....there, I sighed and I'm still sighing.

Extremely beautiful and emotional. Amazed I sit, daydreaming within your words.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Wish you could see the huge smile you brought to my face Jack....your responses always touch me, an .. read more

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