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Dark Angel

Dark Angel

A Poem by Frieda P

Let me be your dark angel
monopolizing 
your fantasies
romping upon your fiery bare'd skin
whispering through the echoes of your mind
I'll possess your soul, be your every desire
small price to pay for that winding path to hell

© 2014 Frieda P


Author's Note

Frieda P

~Fantasy graphic by Karol Bak

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Love the eroticism...it's difficult to express eroticism in writing without being pornographic. I struggle with that all the time but you've done it here. It expresses the overpowering nature of desire and how it can make us follow dark paths. I am a prose writer but this poetry captured me, and the graphics are amazing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much for this amazing review Jennie, nice to meet you. I agree, sometimes my eroticism go.. read more



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In retrospect , I'm not sure what I find more tempting, the Darkness, or the Erotica....So what does that say about me? Ahhh... And so begins the journey within....

Posted 6 Years Ago


Mmmmm.... Deliciously erotic and dark at the same time. Tempting.

Posted 6 Years Ago


I relate to this in a way you'd never think of...and it has nothing to do with the eroticism ;P But you know I love that no matter what, and the photo as well...this is definitely one for Mrs.R's soundtrack ;) xo

Posted 6 Years Ago


A little bit sexy and dark at the same time.I really like this one :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


This reminded me of the tale of angels and the fall from heaven mentioned in the Christian Bible, being that they inhabit the nethers with their leader . . . Well done, I like how deceptive and seductive you've made them sound.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks Tai, inside every devil once live'd an angel of sorts...glad you enjoyed.
Love the poem, especially how it goes into depth of the dark side. Great write.

Kaze~

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lildeadcupcake

6 Years Ago

Your very welcome. :-D
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Oh a dark avatar, you've changed haha ;-)
Lildeadcupcake

6 Years Ago

Yep, hahahahahaha! ;-)
Love the eroticism...it's difficult to express eroticism in writing without being pornographic. I struggle with that all the time but you've done it here. It expresses the overpowering nature of desire and how it can make us follow dark paths. I am a prose writer but this poetry captured me, and the graphics are amazing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much for this amazing review Jennie, nice to meet you. I agree, sometimes my eroticism go.. read more
Frighteningly dark yet awesomely sexy... from the fonts to the outline, from the graphics to the sounds i say "this piece is excellent".

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Though not as frightening as your avatar ;-) Thanks so much, I'm jazz'd you enjoyed this piece...
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Dark and sexy. But my soul is my own. It's not for sale, but you may barrow it from time to time...;) great poem, and I Agree with Sye.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks easy to say when you're in the cafe ron. ;-) Thanks so much, glad you enjoyed...
ron

6 Years Ago

Lol. You are most welcome Frieda ;))
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

;-)
i could imagine Stevie Nicks writing and singing these lyrics...haunting...like shadows dancing in words.

jacob

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Love Stevie Nicks, that's quite the compliment jacob, thanks so much.

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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