Dark Angel

Let me be your dark angel

monopolizing 

your fantasies

romping upon your fiery bare'd skin

whispering through the echoes of your mind

I'll possess your soul, be your every desire

small price to pay for that winding path to hell

Author's Note

~Fantasy graphic by Karol Bak

Reviews

[Jennie Baron]

Love the eroticism...it's difficult to express eroticism in writing without being pornographic. I struggle with that all the time but you've done it here. It expresses the overpowering nature of desire and how it can make us follow dark paths. I am a prose writer but this poetry captured me, and the graphics are amazing.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much for this amazing review Jennie, nice to meet you. I agree, sometimes my eroticism goes over the top, glad you enjoy'd this one.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A price my dear we are all eagerly willing to pay in spades! x good read.

[Frieda P]

Ha ain't the the truth Thomas, thanks so much!

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Whoa... now that's the affect a woman can have on a man, if she were brave enough. That was intrinsic to my inner beast who craves a powerful woman! Excellent write, Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Oh I love that 'intrinsic to my inner beast'...thanks so much Travis!

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

No... thank you, Frieda. ;)

[s y e]

Oooooooooooooft! Damn. How did you manage to make something dark, powerful and deep sound sexy? How does that even work!? Like, you're just the best and can accomplish anything; I know that for sure now.... wow. Blown away, looks like I will be in Joisey earlier than expected ;-))

Loved it! Sizzling hot flip flops & all that jazz!

[Frieda P]

Sometimes my muse is wicked dark, thanks so much noodlebumble, still waiting on you hon! ;-) x

[Mark]

If that is hell, then I'm going there. :P

[Frieda P]

As if you had a choice...hahah ;-P

[Mark]

what you talking 'bout Willis?

[Frieda P]

Hahaha that's my line................you know.

[Mark]

One more thing we have in common. :P

[Rachelle]

Shadows of obsession.....

[Frieda P]

Seems that way, or possession, thanks sweetbind.

[redflutterby]

Dark and sensual together...makes a wicked combination. Lol....youre on quite a roll lately. Showing that evocative temptress side...must be an italian thing huh?? Ha.... ;-)

[Frieda P]

Ha what's your excuse then? I meant thanks so much Red. ;-)

[redflutterby]

Smarty pants...theres no excuse for me. Just a ginger thing!! Lol... ;-pp

[Frieda P]

Mine is Vino Rosso ;-)

[redflutterby]

So technically a ginger thing as well.....lmao!!!!! ;-ppp

[Frieda P]

Ha, you would think of that! hahah ;-)

[Odysseus Wanders]

Depends who you're asking... small price to pay.
This poem terrifies me. Which is great. Its feel absolutely predatory.
These poor soul that have not enough of themselves beware...
Awful good poem. It, for me, highlights the blood sucking vampiric side of love and romance.
The worlds full of it-
Good to read.

[Frieda P]

Great, I hope'd to get that kind of gut reaction, you made my day Terry, and yes, I so agree..thanks so much.

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is a wonderfully dark. And the music goes along with it perfectly. Definitely one of my favorites. My list of favorites from you is growing. xD

[Frieda P]

I don't mind at all, thanks so much Brittany! :-)

[Rob Santana]

Damn Frieda your writing getting darker? This is cool, like it alot.

[Frieda P]

i should put my darkly hued crayons away now eh? Thanks Rob!

[MsJewel]

Oh...I love this dark, decadent little gem Frieda!

:) Julie

[Frieda P]

Actually Julie you inspired this in a way, I remembered this graphic I had tucked away from Karol Bak after you mentioned it....it took on a life of it's own from there, so thank you! Jazz'd you enjoyed. :-)

[MsJewel]

My pleasure!

[Frieda P]

I swear there's a story or poem in every one of his images...such an amazing talent.