Dark Angel

Let me be your dark angel

monopolizing 

your fantasies

romping upon your fiery bare'd skin

whispering through the echoes of your mind

I'll possess your soul, be your every desire

small price to pay for that winding path to hell

Author's Note

~Fantasy graphic by Karol Bak

Reviews

[Jennie Baron]

Love the eroticism...it's difficult to express eroticism in writing without being pornographic. I struggle with that all the time but you've done it here. It expresses the overpowering nature of desire and how it can make us follow dark paths. I am a prose writer but this poetry captured me, and the graphics are amazing.

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much for this amazing review Jennie, nice to meet you. I agree, sometimes my eroticism goes over the top, glad you enjoy'd this one.

[Jack...]

Gives the phrase "go to hell " something I would gladly say yes to and come running. Six lines holding the desires of any heart. An alluring invitation penned in oh such pleasurable pain.

Dark, tempting and sinfully wonderful.

[Frieda P]

Ha, only you would think of that Jack! Now I'm going to smile every time I hear someone say that...thanks, jazz'd you could join me on my dark journey. ;-)

[Baby Ricochet]

This could easily be about addiction. What am I saying, this is aboutaaddiction.

[Frieda P]

You could be on to something there Baby...perhaps.

[Scott Metro]

Where do I sign up...!!!!..lol
Take me to hell...but slowly...hehe...I want to enjoy every savage minute.
Quite the dark erotic piece..
Wonderful
Scott

[Frieda P]

You have to sign in wolf blood...haha, there's a line me thinks ;-)

[Scott Metro]

I'm sure..perhaps I'll just savagely attack the line...lol..I'll take their blood...
LOL
Good write

[redzone]

hmmmm a tempting angel on the road to hell.. why not, heading that way, you can tag along.. but it was fantasies that got me on this path to begin with... Frieda, must admit this poem put the first smile on my face today. thank you.. ~~redzone

[Frieda P]

Exactly, why not enjoy the ride...so jazz'd this made you smile dear curt, that made my afternoon! x

[songstress]

My, you make selling your soul for hedonistic ideals sound tempting. This is a well written piece.

[Frieda P]

Ah, now that's a great review if it can entice you, thanks songstress.

[songstress]

you're welcome, Frieda

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Whoa! Watch out for her! ;)
This is an alluring temptation that one must explore...

Sinfully delightful, Friedalicious!~xoxoxo~:)

[Frieda P]

I think she could mess you up something fierce, you're right. ;-) Thanks, glad you like my sinfully dark fantasy Robbie....xoxoxo

[Robbie~xoxo~]

It's delicious!... you go girl! ~xoxoxo~;)

[Frieda P]

I think I put too much hazelnut creamer in my coffee this morning haha ;-) xo

[Robbie~xoxo~]

send some my way!...I need a little jolt! lol ;) xxx