Dark Angel

Dark Angel

A Poem by Frieda P

Let me be your dark angel
monopolizing 
your fantasies
romping upon your fiery bare'd skin
whispering through the echoes of your mind
I'll possess your soul, be your every desire
small price to pay for that winding path to hell

© 2014 Frieda P


Author's Note

Frieda P

~Fantasy graphic by Karol Bak

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Love the eroticism...it's difficult to express eroticism in writing without being pornographic. I struggle with that all the time but you've done it here. It expresses the overpowering nature of desire and how it can make us follow dark paths. I am a prose writer but this poetry captured me, and the graphics are amazing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much for this amazing review Jennie, nice to meet you. I agree, sometimes my eroticism go.. read more



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"And let me wear a coat of darkness and feed your imaginations...live your fantasy...live your abominations...and then I take off my coat...how would you look at me?" Nicely written Freida...I kind of finding extremely romantic...

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Darkly romantic indeed, thanks so much Chandradhish.
very beautiful exposure, enjoyed

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thank you Sayed.
SAYED THANGAL

6 Years Ago

very pleasure
Wow, blown away. I'd say more, but I'm afraid words won't do this one justice....once again..wow...

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Wow thanks cycy for your visit and review, muchly appreciated...
Temptation dark and dizzy! No man with a breath could resist. Especially when it is wrapped in Frieda's unbelievly exotic and aweinspiring imagery!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Dark and dizzy, that's moi! Thanks so much Divya, jazz'd you enjoyed.
Sexy and dark, just the way I like it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Ha why doesn't that surprise me...thanks KL.
Well ! Men are programmed as such they can't resist that path even if it comes with a Warning :)
They risk everything , heart, soul, body and even their Gods...and that's why this will always remain biggest adventure for any man whose heart dared to beat for love.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Haha is that the problem? That's a poem right there, you should write it ;-) Thanks muchly....
Is there really hell? Ah, you make temptation sounds delicious. =)

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Hmmm, that's a whole other poem gabrielle, I think so, plenty of places right here on earth. Thanks.. read more
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Definitely a driving force i'd want in my life, no matter the methods the allure seems all too tempting to resist. LOVED it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

So jazz'd you enjoyed! Grazie mille BCE.
I'll possess your soul, be your every desire
small price to pay for that winding path to hell

Something of temptation in the air, I think. Obsession is a killer.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

But oh so enticing, thanks Pryde.
Rather laugh with the sinners than cry with the saints, eh? ;) Good one here, Frieda!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Haha yeah something like that Rita. ;-) Grazie mille!

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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