Dark Angel

Dark Angel

A Poem by Frieda P

Let me be your dark angel
monopolizing 
your fantasies
romping upon your fiery bare'd skin
whispering through the echoes of your mind
I'll possess your soul, be your every desire
small price to pay for that winding path to hell

© 2014 Frieda P


Author's Note

Frieda P

~Fantasy graphic by Karol Bak

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Love the eroticism...it's difficult to express eroticism in writing without being pornographic. I struggle with that all the time but you've done it here. It expresses the overpowering nature of desire and how it can make us follow dark paths. I am a prose writer but this poetry captured me, and the graphics are amazing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much for this amazing review Jennie, nice to meet you. I agree, sometimes my eroticism go.. read more



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A price my dear we are all eagerly willing to pay in spades! x good read.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Ha ain't the the truth Thomas, thanks so much!
Whoa... now that's the affect a woman can have on a man, if she were brave enough. That was intrinsic to my inner beast who craves a powerful woman! Excellent write, Frieda.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Oh I love that 'intrinsic to my inner beast'...thanks so much Travis!
Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)

6 Years Ago

No... thank you, Frieda. ;)
Oooooooooooooft! Damn. How did you manage to make something dark, powerful and deep sound sexy? How does that even work!? Like, you're just the best and can accomplish anything; I know that for sure now.... wow. Blown away, looks like I will be in Joisey earlier than expected ;-))

Loved it! Sizzling hot flip flops & all that jazz!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Sometimes my muse is wicked dark, thanks so much noodlebumble, still waiting on you hon! ;-) x
If that is hell, then I'm going there. :P

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Mark

6 Years Ago

what you talking 'bout Willis?
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Hahaha that's my line................you know.
Mark

6 Years Ago

One more thing we have in common. :P
Shadows of obsession.....

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Seems that way, or possession, thanks sweetbind.
Dark and sensual together...makes a wicked combination. Lol....youre on quite a roll lately. Showing that evocative temptress side...must be an italian thing huh?? Ha.... ;-)

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Mine is Vino Rosso ;-)
redflutterby

6 Years Ago

So technically a ginger thing as well.....lmao!!!!! ;-ppp
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Ha, you would think of that! hahah ;-)
Depends who you're asking... small price to pay.
This poem terrifies me. Which is great. Its feel absolutely predatory.
These poor soul that have not enough of themselves beware...
Awful good poem. It, for me, highlights the blood sucking vampiric side of love and romance.
The worlds full of it-
Good to read.


Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Great, I hope'd to get that kind of gut reaction, you made my day Terry, and yes, I so agree..thanks.. read more
This is a wonderfully dark. And the music goes along with it perfectly. Definitely one of my favorites. My list of favorites from you is growing. xD

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

I don't mind at all, thanks so much Brittany! :-)
Damn Frieda your writing getting darker? This is cool, like it alot.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

i should put my darkly hued crayons away now eh? Thanks Rob!
Oh...I love this dark, decadent little gem Frieda!

:) Julie

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Actually Julie you inspired this in a way, I remembered this graphic I had tucked away from Karol Ba.. read more
MsJewel

6 Years Ago

My pleasure!
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

I swear there's a story or poem in every one of his images...such an amazing talent.

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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