Dark Angel

Dark Angel

A Poem by Frieda P

Let me be your dark angel
monopolizing 
your fantasies
romping upon your fiery bare'd skin
whispering through the echoes of your mind
I'll possess your soul, be your every desire
small price to pay for that winding path to hell

© 2014 Frieda P


Author's Note

Frieda P

~Fantasy graphic by Karol Bak

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Love the eroticism...it's difficult to express eroticism in writing without being pornographic. I struggle with that all the time but you've done it here. It expresses the overpowering nature of desire and how it can make us follow dark paths. I am a prose writer but this poetry captured me, and the graphics are amazing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much for this amazing review Jennie, nice to meet you. I agree, sometimes my eroticism go.. read more



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Gives the phrase "go to hell " something I would gladly say yes to and come running. Six lines holding the desires of any heart. An alluring invitation penned in oh such pleasurable pain.

Dark, tempting and sinfully wonderful.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Ha, only you would think of that Jack! Now I'm going to smile every time I hear someone say that...t.. read more
This could easily be about addiction. What am I saying, this is aboutaaddiction.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

You could be on to something there Baby...perhaps.
Where do I sign up...!!!!..lol
Take me to hell...but slowly...hehe...I want to enjoy every savage minute.
Quite the dark erotic piece..
Wonderful
Scott

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

You have to sign in wolf blood...haha, there's a line me thinks ;-)
Scott Metro

6 Years Ago

I'm sure..perhaps I'll just savagely attack the line...lol..I'll take their blood...
LOL
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hmmmm a tempting angel on the road to hell.. why not, heading that way, you can tag along.. but it was fantasies that got me on this path to begin with... Frieda, must admit this poem put the first smile on my face today. thank you.. ~~redzone

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Exactly, why not enjoy the ride...so jazz'd this made you smile dear curt, that made my afternoon! x
My, you make selling your soul for hedonistic ideals sound tempting. This is a well written piece.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Ah, now that's a great review if it can entice you, thanks songstress.
songstress

6 Years Ago

you're welcome, Frieda
Whoa! Watch out for her! ;)
This is an alluring temptation that one must explore...

Sinfully delightful, Friedalicious!~xoxoxo~:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robbie~xoxo~

6 Years Ago

It's delicious!... you go girl! ~xoxoxo~;)
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

I think I put too much hazelnut creamer in my coffee this morning haha ;-) xo
Robbie~xoxo~

6 Years Ago

send some my way!...I need a little jolt! lol ;) xxx

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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