~ Whisper'd Longings A'flutter

COLLABORATION ~ Jack & Frieda

My wanton heart fills my days within mist'd azure

flowing upon seas's of butterfly's lustful dance

shameless abandon of my licentious soul's abundance

Sunlight shimmerings confess dawning desires

Awash o’er wings of cobalt flutter’d fantasie

Singing sonnets of bliss painted mornings

Nimble movements nakedness in nature's eternal joys 

prances about euphoria's smoldering emotions

sentiments set to melodious twinklings of fiery embers

Ecstasy illumines floating whisper'd longings

dreams of feather'd fingers intoxicated yearnings

forever awakened by the essence that is you

Author's Note

Reviews

[Angel]

Oh...you two write so beautifully together! And you chose one of my very favorite songs...I've been known to sing the chorus to this while washing dishes or folding laundry...this and "Oh darling, please believe me...I'll never do you no harm...
Hey, I'm old, what did you expect??

[Frieda P]

Thanks Angel, this was my sister's favorite song too, glad you enjoyed!

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much sweet Angel. Thanks for stopping by our world for a visit.

[Claire in VA]

This is an incredibly beautiful poem that I really enjoyed.
Thanks for collaborating and sharing.
~Claire

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lovely as usual you two.:)

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

"Singing sonnets of bliss painted mornings"--great line!
Then this:
"Nimble movements nakedness in nature's eternal joys

prances about euphoria's smoldering emotions

sentiments set to melodious twinklings of fiery embers"---wow!

I love it!




Ecstasy illumines floating whisper'd longings

dreams of feather'd fingers intoxicated yearnings

forever awakened by the essence that is you

[Frieda P]

Woo doing the happy dance to your review Josie, thanks so much!

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

You are welcome!

[Blue]

Wonderful as always. You've been collaborating often these days, you two. :P

[Frieda P]

Thanks Arzel, glad you enjoyed.

[Rita L. Sev]

Your words blend so beautifully! This is another great collaboration, Frieda and Jack!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Rita!

[kublakhan27]

I am always left awestruck by the works of beauty you both seem to be able to churn out with seeming effortlessness. I wish I could convince both sides of my brain to work in such constructive unison haha I have no idea where that image came from but I'm in the midst of deliberating your intro and I'm trying to come up with observations as I go along. Breathtaking work as always guys :)

[Frieda P]

I LIKE awestruck...your brain works fine Benji, you just keep smacking yourself in the head hahah, grazie mille ;-) xo

[kublakhan27]

Haha Yes, it needs to be knocked into alignment now and again...always a pleasure Mrs.R ;) xo

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Another engaging and may I say rather rampant piece that swells in a readers mind, well done, good read.

[Frieda P]

Rampant, that's a new one, thanks Thomas, muchly appreciated.

[Shaquana Adams]

Nimble movements nakedness in nature's eternal joys
prances about euphoria's smoldering emotions
sentiments set to melodious twinklings of fiery embers

Another beautiful poem from you two. Very nicely written! :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks Shaquana, jazz'd you enjoy'd our collaboration ;-)

[s y e]

Okay so my night has officially been made, reading you both in a beautiful collaboration just makes me sigh and smile and... just sigh!

You guys write so beautifully together, your pens merge as one and you both seem to just know each other, you speak as one and write as one. I just love this one, each one just touches my heart.

// Nimble movements nakedness in nature's eternal joys
prances about euphoria's smoldering emotions
sentiments set to melodious twinklings of fiery embers //

All I have to say to this is.... sighhhhh....

Flip flops & all that jazz!

[Frieda P]

Woo dancing to your review Sye and I'm sure Jack will kick up his heels too when he reads this!

[Jack...]

Yep, those heels are kicked. Sye, thank you for always and I mean always being so kind to us. You do mean so very much to both of us. Your smile is contagious and I can think of nothing better to do at this very moment. :)

[prachi prangya agasti]

beautifully expressed... it was like i was flowing through your words.... brilliant...

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much, glad you enjoy's our collaboration.

[Jack...]

Thanks so very much Prachi.