~Battle ASSHAT

~Battle ASSHAT

A Poem by Frieda P
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Read Rita's' Assault Similes' follow up, it's a riot! http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/RitaSev/1311193/#comment-3279177 For just a chosen few, & you know who you asshats are...

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Scream like a lunatic banshee
get all up in everyone's script'd pen,
call us whatever you please
you bullies are all assimilated alike
criticize the things you fear the most
you're weak in the emblematic knees
seriously, who do you think you're kidding, 
you've not a metaphorical backbone
so fire away, machine gun til you're blitz'd
ricochet us through the assimilated heart 
we're bullet proof epic poesy'd warriors
you shoot us down, try to murder a writer's spirit
take your best shot, try to blow us away
we're here with assault similes to stay
fell on your own sword and bled weakness
we've risen to the unverse'd occasion, 
our poetic souls are tougher than titanium

 

© 2014 Frieda P


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Frieda P

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Too cool, "Bullet-proof epic poesy'd warriors" now that's a title to wear into battle. My sweet friend, you have slapped someone upside the head this morning with this fire-breathing gem. And even in battlemode, your words still carry an air of poetic elegance, albeit while standing along side the cannons hollering "Fire!" Looks like a valliant victory is at hand and no peace treaty will be needed...just run'em off dear poet.

Amazing as always my friend.

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Ha, can you tell I was perturbed? Some people just don't know when to call it quits...thanks Jack, .. read more



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nice nice...go girl, tell them!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Ha, does that count as whining Cassie? ;-)
Cassie

6 Years Ago

Not at all, that is rebuking...lol
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Haha oh good, that's a whole other poem. ;-)
not on the WC for a day and all hell breaks loose, as in Frieda gives em ASSHAT HELL. I would love to help Frieda, but seems like you have this all taken care of. But if you need a hand when you bury em, I can bring shovels for all your warrior friends.. we can put up a sign, "Beware ASSHATs stinking up the place. Oh how I love fighting live a*s holes... er.. redzone calming down.. NOT. Let's go Frieda... ;0) ~~redzone

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

redflutterby

6 Years Ago

Lmao....we tend to do that to people!! ;-)
redzone

6 Years Ago

PLAN B will commence at 11:59 tonight.. I have bought all the cannolis in NJ and when I find out wha.. read more
redflutterby

6 Years Ago

Haha....oh I can do that!! Lmao....
Woot woot! You have rallied the troops with this, Frieda! I for one am at the ready with some "assault similes"! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Woohoooo! I knew I could depend on you to be an epic posey'd warrior Rita! ;-)
Poet's play for keeps. High Stakes Poker. Souls are on the table.
And we don't even need to swear.
Its fun to get sick twisted with word.
Take off a head or two.
Nicely done.
Valhalla awaits with strong song.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

There's a few who aren't interested in poetry or writing at all for that matter, just for kicks and .. read more
Odysseus Wanders

6 Years Ago

oh, the trolls...!
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Trolls, asshats, whatever you want to call them, some are just...I won't say cuz I'm trying to act l.. read more
And that, ladies and gents is why you don't mess with Frieda! Such a poetic call to arms! Down with the Asshats! Lol

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

HAHA hey Travis you should know, don't cross joisey ;-)
Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)

6 Years Ago

I know it well, we ride together, remember? Haha ;)
Well I see not a lot has changed ;-) Nice work, Miss P...I love the title because the Brit and I had a Christmas party and he mooned the camera (not mine, unfortunately) but the best part was he mooned it while posing on some drunken passed out guy's head so...for weeks I called him the Ultimate Asshat xD

Love you. Miss you. This is all guns blazing. xoxo

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Oi my bad!! hahaha, see what happens when you stay away too long! ;-P
KAOlmsted

6 Years Ago

I have about 600 RRs...I'm hoping 463 are from you ;-) xoxo
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Hahaha 465 I think, I'm doing catch up too, had my account closed for a bit and was inundated. xoxo
You tell em lady! HOORAH!!!!!!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Sometimes poets have to have that Marine mentality to deal with these jerks....thanks Baby!!
call us whatever you please
you bullies are all assimilated alike
criticize the things you fear the most
you're weak in the emblematic knees
seriously, who do you think you're kidding,
you've not a metaphorical backbone

But they do like to opine; that is for sure. Sure shooting, Frieda.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

I used my Italiano Beretta 92 FS ~ can't miss!
Pryde Foltz

6 Years Ago

I'm more of an eye-dagger kind of girl
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

When that fails you have no choice but to shoot em right between the eyes, metaphorically speaking o.. read more
well that's taking the term warrior poet quite literally really a good poem .....am i the only one who wonders why David guetta gets credit for this song when Sia took the initiative?

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

You never know around here......I'm glad you're still kicking ;-)
Deron Alexis

6 Years Ago

oi if i go i won't go quietly you'll hear about it and if asshats are killing awesome poets watch yo.. read more
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Ha, nah I'm a butterfly warrior I"m dealt with a helluva bit worse than the lot of those losers...
"you bullies are all assimilated alike

criticize the things you fear the most"

Wow. So true and wise. I have no use for those people too which I had to block two of them. Don't worry queen F for those people are hypocrites and jealous of your success and popularity. Don't let them bother you for they can go to hell within.
Excellent...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

Hahaha...You are welcom muchly...:)......................
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

;-)
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

^^~^^ :>)........................

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