~Battle ASSHAT

~Battle ASSHAT

A Poem by Frieda P
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Read Rita's' Assault Similes' follow up, it's a riot! http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/RitaSev/1311193/#comment-3279177 For just a chosen few, & you know who you asshats are...

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Scream like a lunatic banshee
get all up in everyone's script'd pen,
call us whatever you please
you bullies are all assimilated alike
criticize the things you fear the most
you're weak in the emblematic knees
seriously, who do you think you're kidding, 
you've not a metaphorical backbone
so fire away, machine gun til you're blitz'd
ricochet us through the assimilated heart 
we're bullet proof epic poesy'd warriors
you shoot us down, try to murder a writer's spirit
take your best shot, try to blow us away
we're here with assault similes to stay
fell on your own sword and bled weakness
we've risen to the unverse'd occasion, 
our poetic souls are tougher than titanium

 

© 2014 Frieda P


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Too cool, "Bullet-proof epic poesy'd warriors" now that's a title to wear into battle. My sweet friend, you have slapped someone upside the head this morning with this fire-breathing gem. And even in battlemode, your words still carry an air of poetic elegance, albeit while standing along side the cannons hollering "Fire!" Looks like a valliant victory is at hand and no peace treaty will be needed...just run'em off dear poet.

Amazing as always my friend.

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Ha, can you tell I was perturbed? Some people just don't know when to call it quits...thanks Jack, .. read more



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Damn gurl, I don't want on your bad side..... sheesh.... whoever this is dedicated to is in troubleee hahaha.

Nice rant. Just what I wanna do right now, LOL!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

OH you know who this is about alright! haha, you could never get on my bad side noodlebumble! Rant .. read more
s y e

6 Years Ago

Maybe I do then......!
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

You do, ask Jack...ha he's a troublemaker ;-)
LOL LOL LOL ... got a little bee up the behind ... annoying you this morning? LOL this is great! You tell em Frieda!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Hahaha glad you got a larf from my hissy fit, some people can be so fooking annoying! ;-)
Giggling Star

6 Years Ago

...and don't I know it! ;D
Too cool, "Bullet-proof epic poesy'd warriors" now that's a title to wear into battle. My sweet friend, you have slapped someone upside the head this morning with this fire-breathing gem. And even in battlemode, your words still carry an air of poetic elegance, albeit while standing along side the cannons hollering "Fire!" Looks like a valliant victory is at hand and no peace treaty will be needed...just run'em off dear poet.

Amazing as always my friend.

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Ha, can you tell I was perturbed? Some people just don't know when to call it quits...thanks Jack, .. read more

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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