braille to the touch...

braille to the touch...

A Poem by Frieda P
"

Love is blind

"
You wrote in Braille upon my heart
  tattoo'd  black etchings darkly lit
echoes of what was once impressionist art
     vanquish'd with a glance of thy sword
words not decipherable in the name of love
  inscribed delectation's sans an endorse'd mark
vintage designs deleted of scroll'd scriptures expression
   signature'd confessions bestowed within crimson's pen  
hush'd in unsettling breathless interpretations,
     blindly I followed til you resonate'd in barely touch 

© 2014 Frieda P


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Frieda P


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You wrote in Braille upon my heart
tattoo'd black etchings darkly lit
echoes of what was once impressionist art
vanquish'd with a glance of thy sword
words not decipherable in the name of love
inscribed delectation's sans an endorse'd mark

Tremendous loss and art in these words.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much for your kind words Pryde.



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Ah, touching and exotic to the point of loving, well done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Oh 'exotic' love that, thanks muchly Thomas.
Inscribing a braille message that only they will understand, instead of a spoken truth or an aggressive stance, trusting you to guard the braille on your skin and heart with everything at your disposal . . . How enticing, I love this.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much Tai, jazz'd you enjoyed this one...
This is very beautiful :) The music got me , than the poem captured me, but the crimson pen really got me:) I love it:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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6 Years Ago

How far did they go?????? Lol:) I hope you were inside when it happen, Frieda songs are always meant.. read more
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Haha they're dancing on the ceiling ;-)
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6 Years Ago

lol ha ha:)
You wrote in Braille upon my heart
tattoo'd black etchings darkly lit
echoes of what was once impressionist art
vanquish'd with a glance of thy sword
words not decipherable in the name of love
inscribed delectation's sans an endorse'd mark

Tremendous loss and art in these words.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much for your kind words Pryde.
Braillent write my friend. Clever title to match. To see actuality we must first feel to really know in depth.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

So true, even the sighted are blind sometimes when it comes to feelings, thanks so much BlackRose...
Amazing. Love this, girl.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks muchly doll :-)
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ron
A beautiful poem about love and how it can hurt.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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ron

6 Years Ago

Grazie mille? I know I'm slow but what or who is Grazie mille?
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks a million in Italiano...get with the program ron, been saying that since forever ;-P
I.. read more
ron

6 Years Ago

Oh ok. Grazie un milione to you to Frieda ;-P
" inscribed delectation's sans an endorse'd mark" ...absolutely captivating line... says i
i agree with those taken by the first line ... it engages all the senses ... another wonderful poem Frieda ..
E.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

You've planted a huge grin on my face this early morn E, cheers to ya. x
Love this poem Frieda! Another brilliant write.

Kaze~ :-)

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much Kazie :-)
Lildeadcupcake

6 Years Ago

Your very welcome. :-)
You gave colors to the tired statement "Love is blind", Frieda. There are still millions of dead statements that you might want to resurrect! :) Very beautiful.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Grazie mille Arzel, glad you enjoyed this one. :-)

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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