~Pausing on a sigh

~Pausing on a sigh

A Poem by Frieda P

I paused in your disposition,
an excerpt of my sentiment's
timely extracted passages
affection's cadenced inclinations
complexion's blush'd bias tendencies
dusky clouds amidst delectation's reflections
wildflowers breath at the nape of my neck
scent'd of twilight's mysteries & amber brandy
a calm filled of shivers kind sympathy and tea
parched of wither'd revered druthers, 
begotten heavy sighs of never forgotten harmony
etch'd within scorched reminiscence's memoirs
rewritten script'd blossomed desires on dusty shelves
smoldering in long ago places of nightfall's rhythm 
haunting wakeful hours of dreams without rhyme
wistful for the dance 'tween spaces of sublimity's poesy  


© 2014 Frieda P


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Dear Frieda, you have a mastery over transporting your reader to places that can only exist in some impossibly beautiful realms of their beleaguered minds...Here, I was transported to a beautiful, hazy twilight with a dream lover in a quaint, lovely villa full of comforts, a poor, harassed me can only think of...

scent'd of twilight's mysteries & amber brandy
a calm filled of shivers kind sympathy and tea
parched of wither'd revered druthers,
begotten heavy sighs of never forgotten harmony
etch'd within scorched reminiscence's memoirs
rewritten script'd blossomed desires on dusty shelves

A thundering ovation!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much Divya, that's the best compliment a poet could ever get, if you felt transported I'm .. read more



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Your lines are always so awesomely penned Freida .they flow from the page into my heart with ease.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks Vidya, much appreciate your kind words my friend.
Vidya Bacchus

7 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
I like how you paint a poem and your word flow seems effortless. Enjoyed this! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Grazie mille Shaquana :-)
Your creativity flows effortlessly and you continue to amaze us with your masterpieces daily.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much Praveeta, jazz'd you enjoyed.
Praveeta

7 Years Ago

My pleasure.
Sixteen lines of pure sweet sentiment... This touches my soul

"smoldering in long ago places of nightfall's rhythm"

I love this line (Above)

And the song makes this reader's heart smile... Pic flow right into your written word.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much Arthur, glad you enjoyed, where's those poppies now? :-)
Another beautiful painting by you..Ooops Poem :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Ha thanks Avinash, you're a dear. :-)
Wow! This poem has so much imagery, I had to read it twice to soak it all in. However, this only adds to the beauty of your words. As always, bravo!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

*Smiling* here, thanks so much Gleb!
If I haven't said it before then I shall declare it now. I love your poetic style! from the rhythm, to the word choice, even the lovely abbreviated 'd endings! Well penned indeed!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Wow Aaron, thanks, muchly appreciated !
all of your poems warrant a pause and a pleasant sigh :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

What a sweet thing to say xavier, thanks muchly :-)
Goosebump giver for sure. Especially paired with the music. I want to say wildflowers breathe instead of breath, but maybe that is just me, and if it is wildflower's breath, wouldn't it need an apostrophe?:) Love you!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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redflutterby

7 Years Ago

Bahahaha....we are going to dub you the apostrophe enforcer!!! ;-pp
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

She's already been dubbed the apostrophe Gestapo Red. ;-) Thanks KL, not sure I like breathe, but a.. read more
Written with great intellect and yet still shows genuine emotion. Always a pleasure to read you.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

7 Years Ago

I know what you mean, I need to get to writing something.
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

I'd imagine you can't have a beer, so yep, start penning...
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

7 Years Ago

Not at the moment… maybe after I am done with these drugs.

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