~Pausing on a sigh

~Pausing on a sigh

A Poem by Frieda P

I paused in your disposition,
an excerpt of my sentiment's
timely extracted passages
affection's cadenced inclinations
complexion's blush'd bias tendencies
dusky clouds amidst delectation's reflections
wildflowers breath at the nape of my neck
scent'd of twilight's mysteries & amber brandy
a calm filled of shivers kind sympathy and tea
parched of wither'd revered druthers, 
begotten heavy sighs of never forgotten harmony
etch'd within scorched reminiscence's memoirs
rewritten script'd blossomed desires on dusty shelves
smoldering in long ago places of nightfall's rhythm 
haunting wakeful hours of dreams without rhyme
wistful for the dance 'tween spaces of sublimity's poesy  


© 2014 Frieda P


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Frieda P

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Dear Frieda, you have a mastery over transporting your reader to places that can only exist in some impossibly beautiful realms of their beleaguered minds...Here, I was transported to a beautiful, hazy twilight with a dream lover in a quaint, lovely villa full of comforts, a poor, harassed me can only think of...

scent'd of twilight's mysteries & amber brandy
a calm filled of shivers kind sympathy and tea
parched of wither'd revered druthers,
begotten heavy sighs of never forgotten harmony
etch'd within scorched reminiscence's memoirs
rewritten script'd blossomed desires on dusty shelves

A thundering ovation!

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much Divya, that's the best compliment a poet could ever get, if you felt transported I'm .. read more



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Another tapestry of gold and silver threads.
Choice words and images...
Nice job Frieda.

Scott

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Scott Metro

7 Years Ago

who me...?
Just being colorful....
:)
S.
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

You gotta be colorful to be a poet. ;-)
Scott Metro

7 Years Ago

I KNOW I KNOW
Dear Frieda, you have a mastery over transporting your reader to places that can only exist in some impossibly beautiful realms of their beleaguered minds...Here, I was transported to a beautiful, hazy twilight with a dream lover in a quaint, lovely villa full of comforts, a poor, harassed me can only think of...

scent'd of twilight's mysteries & amber brandy
a calm filled of shivers kind sympathy and tea
parched of wither'd revered druthers,
begotten heavy sighs of never forgotten harmony
etch'd within scorched reminiscence's memoirs
rewritten script'd blossomed desires on dusty shelves

A thundering ovation!

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much Divya, that's the best compliment a poet could ever get, if you felt transported I'm .. read more
First "Sigh" of the day goes to you my friend, as now I pause to take in this wonderful work that I have just read. It is 6:20 am here and my eyes were not quite in focus yet..."were not", but they are now. When like the morning sunrise I find your words and my day is once more bright, fresh feelings awaken and my senses tingle. I loved this poem sweet Frieda, to pause and reflect on past events, whether happy or sad is something we do often. Your poem opened with this thought and provided a glimpse into the beauty that is your mind.


"I paused in your disposition,
an excerpt of my sentiment's
timely extracted passages"


Very beautiful my friend. Keeping this one close so that I may read it again and again.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Your thoughts always warm my heart Jack, you need to keep your reviews and write them as a poem one .. read more

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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