~  dancing in delirium's breath

~ dancing in delirium's breath

A Poem by Frieda P

Lost my grip of sanity one prolific twilight
  awash in splendiferous grandeur
wrapped in fiery heat of your verse's bliss
 i drink from its' licentious magical fountain
    breathless, you sent me swooning

ecstasy of bursting stars
   dancing in symbiotic motion
upon harmonious whirling moons 
   prancing in the danger of your toxic sublimity
     absymal profundity sharp as sword strokes

 sinful soul's zestfulness
          strapp'd in hysteria's restraints  
 derangement under a hypnotic spell,
          felicitously breathing in delirium
pain and pleasure of a  paradisiacal tonic,
             aching in this fix'd addiction

you invoke my sweet psycho
             touched by your trenchant reality
immerse'd me in your marinating juices
         if this is madness, i maniacally acquiesce
savoring this tangy nectar'd oblivion
                  dancing amidst crazed fever's tumult
endlessly luxuriating in your poetic frenzy

© 2014 Frieda P


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Frieda P

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Heat emanates from your lines and my mind is dipping and whirling along with each word. Theirs a sense of frenzied lust here. A complete loss of composure and control...a stripping away of the niceties. The entire last stanza blew my skirt up and off!! No strawberries needed.... can't go out for a smoke though. ;-pxo

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

redflutterby

6 Years Ago

Lol... uh oh....thanks for the warning!! Maybe I need some alcohol too...hahaha!!
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Ha make it a stiff one ;-) hahaha
redflutterby

6 Years Ago

Hahaha....always do!!!



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mad with lust and ecstasy of love.... a powerful sensation comes from the lines depicted... as always a great piece....

Posted 6 Years Ago


Let's keep dancing until there is nothing left, that's the way I live, well done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Ha I figured you danced in delirium, grazie ;-)
Another outstanding poem Frieda!

Kaze~ :-)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much Kazie jazz'd you enjoyed this one! ;-)
Lildeadcupcake

6 Years Ago

:-D Your very welcome Frieda! :-)
Wow. Wow. Wow. Wow. Wow. Wow. Wow.

Need I say more, fiery Frieda? :P

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Laughing here, you're cute. ;-D
Blue

6 Years Ago

Of course, I am. Lol.
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Chic-a-cherry cola that ;-) ha
Driven mad by the lust and ecstasy of love, and the victim gladly accepts the insanity . . . If love could do such crazy things, it makes me wonder what woes could do. Every single word seems to suggest movement, and from that I conceive the thought of a love that never halts, perpetually moving to the tune that only they can hear, I liked this

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

I could dance to your chic-a-cherry cola review, thanks so much Tai....sounds like a nice insanity t.. read more
really the poem is some thing beyond narration, because the words and images are inter linked

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much Sayed, glad you enjoyed this one....
Truly sensational!!

My favourite:

"you invoke my sweet psycho
touched by your trenchant reality
immerse'd me in your marinating juices
if this is madness, i maniacally acquiesce
savoring this tangy nectar'd oblivion
dancing amidst crazed fever's tumult
endlessly luxuriating in your poetic frenzy"


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much Praveeta, glad you enjoyed this one!
Praveeta

6 Years Ago

You are most welcome talented poet.
you invoke my sweet psycho... Love this line! Great song to go with this piece, Frieda!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Haha, it comes from personal experience. ;-) Grazie mille!
again. The song choice is a stellar companion. love the phrase "prolific twilight."

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks muchly for your chic-a-cherry cola review...jazz'd you enjoyed this one Tam.
Sometimes, madness is what we need. And sone people, as you rightly say in this par excellence poem, have that ability to drive us mad, take us to that edge. All this and more said in delightful, mind blowing verses here. Another beauty from you Frieda.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

It's a sweet madness, the best kind Divya, thanks muchly my friend.

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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