In this stillness...

In this stillness...

A Poem by Frieda P
"

that's where I'll meet you

"
In this stillness
      where no breath is audible
where violaceous storm clouds  
           seize the night
beseeching a calmness
                      in its intentions
when compassion flows  
                   into crevices of pain
and grace takes a giant stride
                       in man's footsteps,
star's align in perfect symmetry
                              of truth's authenticity
& genuine purity of friendship's
                          faithfulness never falters
in the ether'd dust particles amidst 
               mankind's rising dawn, 
that's where I'll meet you halfway
                         'tween moon's amber light

© 2014 Frieda P


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Still partaking in friendship even when nothing is needed, still feeling the bond with them despite no necessity for them, and enjoying the presence of a companion in the neutral stance, and enjoying every minute of it. This piece shows the purity of friendship and the soft bliss that accompanies a companion, even in times of contempt. Well done, indeed.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much Tai.



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This one is sweetly haunting my friend.Really loved it I did :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Always jazz'd to sweetly haunt you my dear...ha ;-) grazie mille
Vidya Bacchus

6 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
Cryingkate

6 Years Ago

lol,,,,,,,
One of you better works I think frieda

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

High praise coming from you Tate, thanks i kind of liked this one myself.
Sometimes there is nothing like stillness to understand how blessed we are...

"in the ether'd dust particles amidst
mankind's rising dawn,
that's where I'll meet you halfway
'tween moon's amber light

A new dawn is surely rising...with your poetry! This is mind blowing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Oh, yay, Lindsey Stirling again! :D

I really love this poem. You put so much into your words.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Yes I'm totally obsessed with her now, thanks, glad you enjoyed this one.
compassion, grace,
lines trace the wonders
compassion the sponge
empathy lights the path
Battered, yet a pulse,
the air rises, the light warms,
the cool steel forecasts
your message to my ear,
a locomotive nears,
Control is felt long before it is seen,
the band awaits,
liberate or domesticate
ah a Valentine,


Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Stunning lee, hope you're going to publish that one, grazie mille my friend!
Its soooo beautifully written that i read it twice..because the simplicity of the poem touched me deeply...the way your words flow so gracefully..i wish i was as gud as u my lady...phenomenal piece of work...:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

You're too kind, thanks so much, jazz'd you enjoyed :-)
Heyyyy...you found my secret hiding place!

Beautiful!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Antoñyo

6 Years Ago

"I KNOW!" he said, looking side to side. "Who are these people?"

you're very welcome
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Ha, my bad....we''ll have to find you a new place uptown ha ;-)
Antoñyo

6 Years Ago

~ too funny!
The calm before the passion storm… softly seductive and truly romantic. Love seeing the softer side of you.

Posted 6 Years Ago


"star's align in perfect symmetry
of truth's authenticity
& genuine purity of friendship's
faithfulness never falters"

That's totally captivating and touching. When it comes to friendship, I'll always believe that it's a blessing to find a true one.

Wonderful!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks Dhaye, it's totally in sync with the sentiments of your poem!
Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

I know...You're welcome, Frieda.
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Like minds and all that jazz. ;-)
Another day, another masterwork from Mrs.R...the first two lines are fitting as I almost have to hold my breath to take in all little flashes of brilliance. You know the drill my friend...you post something, I gush over it, but not because you're my friend, because you're a brilliant writer...xo

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Ha smart a*s, this made me actually laugh out loud, can't resist it when you gush Benji, soon you'll.. read more
kublakhan27

6 Years Ago

Haha Always nice making you laugh Mar.R...my pleasure as always, much love ;) xo

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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