In this stillness...

In this stillness...

A Poem by Frieda P
"

that's where I'll meet you

"
In this stillness
      where no breath is audible
where violaceous storm clouds  
           seize the night
beseeching a calmness
                      in its intentions
when compassion flows  
                   into crevices of pain
and grace takes a giant stride
                       in man's footsteps,
star's align in perfect symmetry
                              of truth's authenticity
& genuine purity of friendship's
                          faithfulness never falters
in the ether'd dust particles amidst 
               mankind's rising dawn, 
that's where I'll meet you halfway
                         'tween moon's amber light

© 2014 Frieda P


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Still partaking in friendship even when nothing is needed, still feeling the bond with them despite no necessity for them, and enjoying the presence of a companion in the neutral stance, and enjoying every minute of it. This piece shows the purity of friendship and the soft bliss that accompanies a companion, even in times of contempt. Well done, indeed.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much Tai.



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I see the passion has been overcome by wisdom :) you have such talent with words ................. splendid poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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WILDERNESS

6 Years Ago

haha ................... think the thing over ;))))))))))))))))
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

I know, it came out ALL wrong hahhaa
WILDERNESS

6 Years Ago

You made my day , sweet lady...................... still laughing.................... wish you the b.. read more
OH MY. Lindsey Stirling is my husband's new guilty pleasure. Amazing musician. Just saying. but I agree with Jack. There is a beautiful softness to your words. Love this.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

I don't blame him, I just only recently discovered her talent and I'm obsessed...thanks so much Tam... read more
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Dye
I've so missed reading your words. This is such a beautiful thought.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

I've missed you heaps, nobody heats this place quite the same way you do, thanks Dye. ;-)
It is through introspection that you get to still the hurried world of the externals and dwell on the internals. And, indeed, by doing so, you align yourself to where you were meant to go. Safe journey, friend!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Wise words sweetbind, but I'd expect nothing less from you, thanks muchly my sweet friend!
Rachelle

6 Years Ago

Am gearing up to buy a new laptop…. no more reviewing from the phone - which means I can also writ.. read more
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Ha I hear you, eating is much more satisfying then a touchscreen...
Like this, good vocabulary, love violaceous...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Love that word too, thanks so much Leslie...
Stars align in your poetic words, stillness is joyful in your loving thoughts and words are voiceless but impactful when they speak the truth of the universe. Masterful and universal...:)....................

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

You're too kind my sweet friend, thanks muchly, enjoy your Valentine's Day. ;-)
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

You too...You are welcome...:)...................
The true state of love...when there is no more pain, trust is never broken and compassion exists for all. What beautiful thoughts youve expressed in this universal valentine. Love for all...not the romantic kind which can fail but a deeper emotion that comes from the soul.

You are loved my wonderful friend.... not just for your amazing ability to write and endure but because you have a truly lovely heart. Your humor makes us laugh....your warmth gives us comfort...your passion makes us dance. You are a gift to all the lives you touch....like the butterfly you flutter around us bringing color and light to everything.... thank you for being you!

100 dark chocolates and bouquet of wildflowers...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

OMG Red, you blew me away with this one my sweet friend....you made my day special, if not my entire.. read more
Be still mine, sweetie. ;o) When heaven touches... Suuuprrb for today. A FAB LOVINGLY piece.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Grazie mille BlackRose, for those of us that don't have a specific Valentine, I thought it apropos, .. read more
Wow...
You see the face I am making in the picture? Your poetry has done that to me once again.
This is so utterly beautiful...I have no words.


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Awh thanks so much Angel, have a sweet Valentine's Day my friend!
In this stillness
where no breath is audible
good comparison ... wonderful read
ahena :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much Ahena, glad you enjoyed this one :-)

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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