In this stillness...

In this stillness...

A Poem by Frieda P
"

that's where I'll meet you

"
In this stillness
      where no breath is audible
where violaceous storm clouds  
           seize the night
beseeching a calmness
                      in its intentions
when compassion flows  
                   into crevices of pain
and grace takes a giant stride
                       in man's footsteps,
star's align in perfect symmetry
                              of truth's authenticity
& genuine purity of friendship's
                          faithfulness never falters
in the ether'd dust particles amidst 
               mankind's rising dawn, 
that's where I'll meet you halfway
                         'tween moon's amber light

© 2014 Frieda P


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Still partaking in friendship even when nothing is needed, still feeling the bond with them despite no necessity for them, and enjoying the presence of a companion in the neutral stance, and enjoying every minute of it. This piece shows the purity of friendship and the soft bliss that accompanies a companion, even in times of contempt. Well done, indeed.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much Tai.



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Wow. I likes this a lot. The powerful imagery was conjured by your appropriate poetic touches, Frieda. Happy valentines!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks Arzel, jazz'd you enjoyed...have a great Valentine's day! :-)
Blue

6 Years Ago

It's not a good valentine's day so far. Haha.
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Ha I hear ya, but thought I'd say it anywho ;-)
This is a keeper, for sure. A beautiful Valentines write. Nice job Frieda ... you are such a natural talent!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Ha apropos for sure...you're still a star though my friend. :-)
Giggling Star

6 Years Ago

Ok, even better Giggling Star! Thank you for christening me!
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

PERFECT!!!
This is amazingly powerful, my favorite line is "where violaceous storm clouds seize the night beseeching a calmness in its intentions when compassion flows into crevices of pain" The contradiction between the storm, and the calmness of its intention is superb. and then the imagery I have as compassion fills all the pain filled chasms of the heart... incredible! Naturally, I also really like your last line, it is whimsical in its beauty, meeting someone, even if halfway, in the amber glow of moonlight!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Wow, thanks for such an exquisite review, so thrilled you enjoyed this one Nusquam...will visit you .. read more
This is a very beautiful piece of poetry, I loved loved it.....it is kind of serene, peaceful, nice one Frieda

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Frieda P

6 Years Ago

HA!!! ;-P Love you!................................
Cassie

6 Years Ago

Love you right back..Hope you have received my big big hug.
Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Ha is that what knocked me over...squishy hugs back :-)
Can you hear that? The whole world just went silent after reading this fantastic poem.

// beseeching a calmness
in its intentions
when compassion flows
into crevices of pain //

You are just fantastic and each poem blows me away each time. I cannot remember a time that I would read you and you've not blown me away... You do each and every time. This is definitely one of my favourites by far. It's just you, pouring your heart out like you always do.

You know I am a huge fan of Lindsey too. :-)

Flip flops & all that jazz.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

You know I'm doing the happy dance to this review noodlebumble, grazie mille peanut...Happy Valentin.. read more
s y e

6 Years Ago

Happy Valentines Day to you, too, Mama F!
There is a certain softness to your words today my dear friend. This poem truly touches my heart. It is an immense joy to read such beautiful flowing words as I start my day. Gives me hope that good things can possibly happen. I also love the image and the quote...a voice that does not speak in words, but speaks in love. That is your poem this morning. As I sit here before the sun rises, staring out the window, thinking, re-reading your words in my head, I find my heart beats just a bit faster because of this wonderful poem I am pondering.

100 unspoken words of affection
Love sure does look good on your Frieda. No joking around, no funny Jimmy Fallon speak...this poem is pure bliss to me and if I never read another, my heart would still be full. You are truly amazing my friend.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Ahh be still my heart, this is the best Valentine's gift I could ever get, you blow me away Jack, th.. read more
Wonderful place to meet...
A pretty write here...
Happy Valentine Day Miss Frieda.!!

Scotty

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much Scotty, Happy Valentine's Day to you too!
Scott Metro

6 Years Ago

:)
Scotty.....

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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