Lapis Lazuli Enchantment

Lapis Lazuli Enchantment

A Poem by Frieda P

 
 Entranc'd in your quiver
    my heart takes a leap
       dancing a'loft captivating
     stratospheres of blitzing stardust,
          radiating in tinsel'd azure hues
       wafting in violaceous diamonds
           of crystalline lapis lazuli shimmer
         streaming a delicate aria
             in its tempo's hypnotic glint
   cello's hum & shiver a whimsical melody 
                 commanding a prolific message,
          strumming across my heart stings
    striking old familiar love chords
                     striking harmonious notes
      beating in my aching chest 
                  a bumble of dragonflies 
              prancing overhead in 
                     perfect symmetry 
charm'd intentions etch'd
         makes my soul tremble and sigh,
script'd in a deep ginger'd esprit
                    within cobalt's luminous skies


© 2014 Frieda P


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A picture is worth a thousand words they say, but it is as if the pictures you paint upon the mind of the reader are infinitely more indescribable, yet we're left with lasting impressions of a dizzying design upon our minds. Fine work my friend and so characteristically Frieda.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Are you trying to say I'm dizzy Astro? ;-) I meant thanks so much, nice to see you on my page again.. read more
Astro

7 Years Ago

That's just from all the dancing. :)



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A dazzling write, Frieda. You carried me away with your words.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Spell like, a spell to capture indeed, well done, good read.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Grazie mille.
Sigh. Sigh. Sigh. Sigh. Sigh.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Woo, five sighs, grazie!
Blue

7 Years Ago

Hold on. I'm on my sixth.
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Woooo, now you got me swooning dear. ;-)
Lovely write up ,grabbing full of pictures.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much msharma, glad you enjoyed.
msharma

7 Years Ago

thanks to you too keep writing
Feeling as if someone you love is able to take you beyond the stars . . . You've penned an extravagant experience that should be treasured dearly by all. Well done, I like this

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much Tai, jazz'd you enjoyed this one...
A Fantasia of a write. This should be animated.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks Ken, I like where your mind took this.
The feeling of being pulled(lured?) deeper and deeper into the work.....excellent work!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Grazi Mille Len!
A picture is worth a thousand words they say, but it is as if the pictures you paint upon the mind of the reader are infinitely more indescribable, yet we're left with lasting impressions of a dizzying design upon our minds. Fine work my friend and so characteristically Frieda.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Are you trying to say I'm dizzy Astro? ;-) I meant thanks so much, nice to see you on my page again.. read more
Astro

7 Years Ago

That's just from all the dancing. :)
Fantastically written.. Lovely expression!!!

Keep sharing..!!

Good Wishes..!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much for your visit and review, muchly appeciated.
Wistful and romantic, a true love poem… It made my heart ache and long to exist within it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much Imogean, glad you enjoyed,

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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