Rhapsodic Poetic  Pearls

Rhapsodic Poetic Pearls

A Poem by Frieda P
"

~breathe me

"
There are times when poetry is just simply, poetry
    words coming together that sing a song or rhyme
  ideal ideas summoned within muse's rhapsodic thoughts 
   more often times about death or eternal life
Love's blindness or universal forgiveness
   pearls of wisdom don'd in a pen's signature 
Grand reasoning of exhilarating proportions
       script'd without fear or apprehension,
             or just fun to roll off the tongue
  Saucy soul sisters serendipitously saunter   
  Bodacious baubles bubble beautifully bound
It's remembrances, past, future and todays
   exalted lovers who cuddle and coo us  
    & those which are the bane of our existence  
Rainbows and stars leaping over cobalt'd blue moons,
       cherished reminiscent of bygone days
Gods, goddesses, fairies and berry, cherry dust
   
Kisses a bazillion miles deep, marmalade delusions,
       hugs that reach across skies, wrapp'd in tissue'd allusions
Dancing upon stratospheres of nectar'd light
 Joie de vivre of pickled posies
   held together with flecks of luminosity's glow 
Apricot and golden threads of an echoes' flow
    indistinguishable like two peas in a pod
  tantamount to polar opposite compulsions
     or scatter'd altered sentiments at random
      tango together to console inamorata's tiffs 
Flamboyant and flashy or restrained, no rules apply
    still playfully submerged on paper
Grandiose finale of rhythms imaginative encore
    a celebration in life's masterpiece of poetic license

© 2014 Frieda P


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"Love's blindness or universal forgiveness
pearls of wisdom don'd in a pen's signature"

My favorite lines.

I love poems which deal with poetry and you nailed this one, Frieda. I love your alliteration in:
"Saucy soul sisters serendipitously saunter" and "Bodacious baubles bubble beautifully bound".



Posted 10 Years Ago


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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Grazie mille Arzel, jazz'd you enjoyed this one, just so happens I adore poems about poetry too.



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Beautiful just beautiful poetry Frieda! Awesomely written. :-D

Kaze~ ;-)

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Grazie mille Kazie :-)
♔ CrownedDevil ☾

10 Years Ago

Your very welcome Frieda. :-) :-D
The power of poetry. Its pull, its joy, its solace, and eclectic mix of emotions -- summed up by a lovely poetess.

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much KL....
Maybe this should be on the front page of the cafe...cause it sums us all up doesn't it?! This is brilliant Frieda! It's what keeps me coming back here...no rules and no need for safe words:)

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ha Queenie, I'll talk to management see what they say ;-) Thanks I'm jazz'd you could relate to thi.. read more
That's why poets can do what they do. There are no absolute rules. The words can fly, the words can flounder,the words can speak of a thousand things...or only one...

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Exactly Marie thanks so much for reading.
Your words always leave me in awe...really love this piece :) x

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Awh so kind of you to say Tia....thanks muchly :-) x
Amazing how your words all fit in, You know am a big fun of yours. This is really good.

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much Cassie, always love to see your sunshine smile on my page.
Joie de vivre of pickled posies

LOL … remind me to pass at dinner at chez Frieda. All kidding aside this was a really wonderful and elegant piece.

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Laughing there, I just threw that in for good measure. You'll have the best table in the joint when .. read more
There are so many words I love here. but the remarkable thing is they fit like they've always fitted. They are joined like its natural and its a wonder they've only now been joined.

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Ken, your words mean a lot, coming from a poet I adore, thank you muchly.
He smiles saying, "Yep, that about covers it..."
Me too. Sometimes acoustic guitar, no band, clear themes of ernest composure.
And others, David Lee Roth style, rolling vocals sexy, with all the flair and wile.
But you go beyond two styles, your eluding to at least 6 themes...
Good control of the movement and transition. I do these a bit myself.
Writing layered verse and rhyme scheme. Not easy. Most do one or the other.
You've a knack for this way of writing.
So I humble us both. How convenient.
Fun to read. Fun to think about.
If it makes me ramble... its a good thing.
I like your fruity bubbly bodacious bazillion floaty space words,
kinda like a fun house.
Cool write. And very true.
You honor poetry.

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Love your review Terry, thanks for your in depth review, jazz'd you enjoyed.
You have encompassed all of us on this site so well. I have read some pretty amazing poems here, learned some lessons from others and feel like I'm part of a community that understands each other. Well done Frieda!

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Frieda P

10 Years Ago

Thanks muchly Giggles, muchly appreciated!

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