Just a silly rhyme....sort of

Just a silly rhyme....sort of

A Poem by Frieda P
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It's satire people, lighten up ;-)

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My life was never meant to rhyme
nor a stitch in time
although i do have rhythmy blues
metaphorically speaking, i sure can tap those shoes
give me prose any day of the week,
and I can certainly turn it bleak
frays upside down and sideways
that's the house specialty craze
my maze'd poetic verse 
is strictly unrehearsed,
prancing delusions
of uttermost confusion
if you're discombobulated,  kerfuffl'd
or bewilder'd,  join the cafe's allusions
 I told you I couldn't rhyme!


© 2014 Frieda P


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Frieda P


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your words have rhythm and beat, who needs rhyme...seldom use it myself unless it is natural...but then there are those purists who believe form has to be followed always..

oh well...can't please all the people all the time...

and my poetry reflects my life for sure...not much rhyme...and at times the rhythm goes off like a bad song.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks jacob, yep some people have strict rules about this poetry stuff, can't please em all is righ.. read more



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Love the quote, hahahahahahha! Brilliantly written Frieda. :-D

Kaze~

Posted 7 Years Ago


My, my. I enjoyed this, Frieda. I think you did well on this! :)

Comical and cute write. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

*Laughing* here, sometimes you just gotta say it. ;-)
You said Kerfuffl'd! How awesome! =D

While I suppose rock and roll can be the cure... I think Rhymes are pretty good, like fine wine that with time, get better with the rythem of the days.

Thanks for sharing!
Aaron

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Ha great word isn't it? ;-) I like rhyme too if it's done well, it just doesn't come naturally to m.. read more
Rhyming is cool, prose is cool, writing is cool ,sharing is cool; infinitely better than shooting at each other. Last line suggestion: " I told you i'd never be muzzled . " My sense frieda, is that you like to talk, and you do it very well with words. Obviously, the point was about to rhyme or not to rhyme and, I say, what ever floats your boat..........

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

I concur, it's all good, but some people are of the mindset it needs to rhyme. Ha, you have my numb.. read more
paul sal.....

7 Years Ago

Hey, that's the purpose of this place, is it not? Please visit my place when you have a chance....
i'm disappointed you didn't rhyme 'kerfuffl'd'

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Ha kiss my arse, I told you I couldn't rhyme ;-)
What in carnations...did you come up with this time...
I'm feeling a bit better....
just wanted to stop by and make my presence known...
this had a thought out plan...no...
seems you were just going with it...
no particular theme...except what is presented...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Something someone said to me, ha the theme is kiss my tuchus....thanks Glen...how's that book going .. read more
Glen Yumang Manese

7 Years Ago

The book is fair...the readership is through the roof...our genre --- poetry...is a hard sale...but .. read more
I find it really hard to rhyme too.This was funny and very much Freida :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vidya Bacchus

7 Years Ago

Yes snarky lol
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Like looking in the mirror huh? haha
Vidya Bacchus

7 Years Ago

Ha aint that the truth :D
I laughed lot of times by reading your poems, which is more than anything in the world I need at present, so your writing and many other writings helped me immensely, I may say reader is independent in every sense, still Xavier Silverton is my favorite poet, sorry

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks Linda, glad you got a larf out of it, he's one of my favorite's too...
Linda alexander

7 Years Ago

You most welcome, take care
hello friend, sometimes it is not necessary to make rhyme or write something good, just need a bohemian mind, to express a poetic mind from feelings, enjoy it and I like your style

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Ah like that bohemian style, thanks so much for your visit and review, I like your style too.
I particularly like how the poem itself is an example of the inability to rhyme, an aspect that I assume symbolizes the caprice of reality and the general inability to capture that in its perfect form. A poem about not being able to rhyme, trying anyways, but failing to rhyme anyways. Clever, if I do say so myself. Well done.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks Tai, I'm glad you said so yourself too. Muchly appreciated.

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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