Love is more profound...

Love is more profound 
   than an intangible feeling
serious play on heartstrings
    within duet's concerto
poetry written on the soul
    of imperfect harmony
graceful dance within turbulence 
     of storm clouds
utterances of understanding
        'tween secret glances

sentiments spoken on lofty clouds,
    scripted in skywriting's destiny
a bond that supersedes
   one's own self-indulgence 
awakening spirit's burning
    desires of body & mind
acceptance in exhalation's dark spaces
     embraces reveling in sparks of
familiarity's illumination
     unfurled in the ecstasy 
        of another's inspirations 
surrender bound of peace & truths
         in mystery's exalted splendor

Amore, je t'aime. ~ in any language...

Author's Note

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

All beautifully penned and conveyed lines of the warm heart you possess. Your readers will exalt you in your splendour...:)...........

[gabrielle]

love is beyond words, beyond reason and explanation but it is reflected through our actions. enjoyed reading it Ms. F!

[Ahena MK]

poetry written on the soul...

nice one !!! good crafting !!

[Bowers]

"serious play on heartstrings
within duet's concerto
poetry written on the soul
of imperfect harmony"

beautiful write, dear friend, your idea has composed a piece of love, a beautiful composition, that I admire, as I do any of your writes! Such an inspiring piece you've written, very romantic, full of imagery. I am in love with this write! :D

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

I love these lines:
"familiarity's illumination
unfurled in the ecstasy
of another's inspirations
surrender bound of peace & truths
in mystery's exalted splendor"

Love is indeed an inspiration... the road to place of peace...but still moves us in mysterious ways.
Excellent word choice. =)

[Lyn Anderson]

Meus dentes, Ti amo Te amo tambem. Okay, enough of that. Nice write, and full of lovely romantic blissful linguas.

[Angel]

This is one of the best things you've done. I really like this one.
Keep 'em coming, Sweetie...

[icelandicblue]

So very romantic and filled with such lovely imagery. It captures the beauty of two lovers as they become entwined in something so much more profound than they are apart. A beautiful read this Wednesday morning.

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Love the poem, Frieda!

Kaze~ :-)

[00000000000000000000000..]

Yes love is profound and you gave all the insight of a wonderful piece:)