Hot coffee glances ~

Hot coffee glances ~

A Poem by Frieda P
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reminiscing...

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Reminiscing  within gentle quivers,  

   entrancing scent of magnolias  

    wafting on summer breezes, 

early morning's steaming coffee glances

     love scribbles left on the sheets

      in inky true blue sentiment's hue

  a warm embrace around the waist

   wisps of hair flying in moonlight

tender kisses on closed eyes,

   sweet whisper'd  lingerings  upon

    indulgences  of oil drenched skin, 

        breathing in reflections of  spirit's fiery embers

          lit the intensity ablaze in my heart  

© 2014 Frieda P


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Frieda P

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I am slowly but surely attempting to catch up on some of your older pieces, which I didn't get around to reviewing when they were still new...you know I hate missing out on any of your works, but with an imagination a prolific as yours, sometimes things slip through the cracks...you can forgive me for missing the odd one, right Mrs.R? ;)

Two reasons for starting with this one: it's the oldest one of yours in my RR list, and of course, the title...of course, after 67 reviews there isn't much else for even me to say...it takes me about five poems to get that many reviews, but that's beside the point ;P And you can probably surmise the things that are going through my mind as I read this one anyway...it has me thinking, probably more now than I would have been had I read it in April...it's fairly direct by your standards, but as always, it's unmistakably you...I wonder how long it's been since you've read this one yourself...I'm as intrigued by that as I am by the poem, cuz I'm wondering what you'll say when you do ultimately get this review...again, there just isn't much I can say about the poem itself, I can only concur with that everyone else has said...I'll try to get so some of the others as soon as possible love :) xo

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Cozy love and a warm mug, is the way to start any morning. Love this piece!

Posted 10 Years Ago


this is incredible and so so lovely....thanks for sharing

Posted 10 Years Ago


So lovely! Made me feel all fuzzy, I want coffee now :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


A spark turns into a blaze all while your beautiful words float on the soft currents of your words. It is simply beautiful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Cute and so very very lovely! ♥

Posted 10 Years Ago


beautiful, romantic and heartfelt write hun.
great job, i enjoyed the read :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


I really like the layout. The cursive and indents flow much like the content setting a calm and loving mood.

Posted 10 Years Ago


It had a soothing effect on me. Great work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


i probably make 600 coffee's in the morning which allows me to have a multitude of steaming coffee glances ... grrrrr !!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is wicked awesome work. Really enjoyed. ^-^

Posted 10 Years Ago



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