~ I want to skydive in red stilettos

I want to skydive in red stilettos

take a leap off the wild side,

sip Chateau Lafite & Margaux

whilst driving 100 mph,

wind blown tresses

in a vintage Lamborghini,

cruise on the Rising Sun

in the south of France

sunbathe naked on the sands

of an Italian villa's shores,

take a cool dip in luscious 

champagne bubbles 

 at the Fontana di Trevi,

dance a sultry tango amidst 

a moonlit Brazilian jungle,

have my spirit soar

in sheer delirium

yet, 

more than anything at all ~

I want to love

 with all the fire & soul 

in my heart

Author's Note

Reviews

[Patricia]

Oh I how I love these poems....I have wrote a few myself and I know how much fun they are and at the same time courageous to put them out there...which is why I don't share mine...big chicken....but not you my new friend...Love your style. This is beautiful and daring, feminine and strong. Great work!

[Frieda P]

Oh c'mon Pat, put on your big girl pants and publish them! ;)

[Patricia]

LMAO.... I know, right? There was a local poetry club that I use to be in and it was led by a semi-retired Lit professor and he just loved me and I adored him. However, he use to push me out of comfort zone and make assignments that really challenged me, and the things I wrote I still haven't shared but maybe two of them on my blog a long time ago. I really didn't have a choice because if you skipped challenges more than three a year you were booted because he did this in his spare time and didn't waste time on people who weren't serious. So he waited until I missed two challenges and made the next challenge a poem about masturbation...LOL OMG! So I did one and maybe one day I will share that one. It is tasteful of course and at least I did it but it took me over a week and it is a simple poem but I had such a hard time with it.

[Frieda P]

HA now that's brave! After that, you should be able to let anything fly..... ;)

[Patricia]

LOL You would think?

[Frieda P]

Hey it's only us, and we won't tell. ;P

[Patricia]

OK I will share it sometime this week ... well I will try anyway :)

[Frieda P]

Pfft and tush, just do it girlfriend! ;)

[Patricia]

:) You got it!!!!! Next time I share I will post it. But if it sucks be kind LOL

[Frieda P]

If it sucks I don't usually comment, my momma taught me to keep my big trap shut if I have nothing nice to say, not as though I ever listened though. haha

[Patricia]

LOL I know I was told the same but it didn't stick but you can comment all you want good or bad ...I can take criticism or I wouldn't be here.

[Frieda P]

There's a difference between critiquing a poem and saying it sucks, I'll tell you that in private haha

[Patricia]

OK you got a deal :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Personally, I don't want to do anything in red stilettos, but the message is bold and wonderful - grab it all, carpe diem and lay it all out there... Great one here, Frieda!

[Honey-Bee]

Love it! Sounds like fun!

[janzsuico]

"I want to love
with all the fire & soul
in my heart"

How I wish I had said these lines to someone... fiery emotion, a flammable love. Beautiful :)

[Frieda P]

'Flammable love', I really like that, thanks muchly janzsuico ;-)

[Chris Micha]

I want to go too, but I'll stick to shoes. ;) I really enjoyed this piece. Amazing job! :)

[Frieda P]

Ha I hope so, not sure you'd look grand in stilettos. ;) Grazie mille.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

I wish you all the love that you deserve and you know belongs to you!
This beautiful fast paced yet a write that holds me back to re-read...
Is the prayer of a woman
Genuine

[Frieda P]

You're sweet kiddo, thanks muchly.

[Michael G. Smith]

Sounds like you want the whole enchilada? All I can say is go for it.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Michael.

[MsJewel]

How did I miss this one Frieda??? I just hate it when life (and work) gets in the way of great poetry. You know how much I love poems about love and romance and this is sweet and sexy, soft and strong at the same time...definitely one of my favs by you - and to be honest - as a lover of sexy shoes - you had me at the title!

:) Julie

[Frieda P]

Awh thanks, means a lot coming from the the mistress of romance :) Yes, life is so unfair when it gets in the way of poetry, I concur Julie!

[Dream Weaver]

Woof! Excusez-moi, puis-je dire la trame?
Beautifully done Mon Cher! ;)

[Frieda P]

Merci Beaucoup & RAWR ;)

[s y e]

I bet you would have known the title would have reeled me in when I saw stilettos. I'm so like my mama ;-) this was great. I loved how it gave off a 'I'm free' vibe.

An amazingly well written poem. And... SHOES !!!

Stilettos & all that jazz xoxo

[Frieda P]

Grazie mille and of course, I was waiting for you to get into the red stiletto mood noodlebumble. xo

[s y e]

Ha, I reviewed this two days ago but you didn't get it. :-P Always a pleasure, you know I lurv my shoes. xo

[Frieda P]

Oh my gremlins messing with my stilettos....ha it figures round here. x

[s y e]

Yes I love your shoes too.... I borrowed a pair by the way.

[Shubhangi]

after all...its all about love..love is all you need...this poem makes me love love more.
a poem of the free-spirited...well done.
in my language, "bahut achi hai"!
:)

[Frieda P]

Sounds like you sneezed, bless you. ;) I meant thanks muchly!

[Shubhangi]

its not sneezing, my friend. its in hindi.

[Frieda P]

I know, just kidding with you. ;)

[Shubhangi]

okay.. :) :D

[Frieda P]

Don't pay attention to half of what I say. ;D

[Shubhangi]

no offense taken..I didn't know that you would know about hindi... so I was just telling. :)

[Frieda P]

I don't really, but you said in your language so I figured, hey, I barely speak English most days...haha

[Shubhangi]

hehe...hey what time is it there? its 2:30am here!! ;)

[Frieda P]

5:03 PM, shouldn't you be sleeping? Another poet with insomnia. :)

[Shubhangi]

yes, to some extent but not exactly... like now i am feeling sleepy...so good night frieda... or should i say good evening?!! :D