~ I want to skydive in red stilettos

~ I want to skydive in red stilettos

A Poem by Frieda P



I want to skydive in red stilettos

take a leap off the wild side,

sip Chateau Lafite & Margaux

whilst driving 100 mph,

wind blown tresses

in a vintage Lamborghini,

cruise on the Rising Sun

in the south of France

sunbathe naked on the sands

of an Italian villa's shores,

take a cool dip in luscious 

champagne bubbles 

 at the Fontana di Trevi,

dance a sultry tango amidst 

a moonlit Brazilian jungle,

have my spirit soar

in sheer delirium

yet, 

more than anything at all ~



I want to love

 with all the fire & soul 

in my heart

© 2014 Frieda P


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Oh I how I love these poems....I have wrote a few myself and I know how much fun they are and at the same time courageous to put them out there...which is why I don't share mine...big chicken....but not you my new friend...Love your style. This is beautiful and daring, feminine and strong. Great work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Patricia

10 Years Ago

LOL I know I was told the same but it didn't stick but you can comment all you want good or bad ...I.. read more
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

There's a difference between critiquing a poem and saying it sucks, I'll tell you that in private ha.. read more
Patricia

10 Years Ago

OK you got a deal :)



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After I read this poem I put skydiving in drag on my bucket list.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sounds like a blast. Superb writing, dear Frieda. ^-^

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Really good write the freedom it portrayed reminded of the decadent roaring twenties!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Ya baby live it! :) :) :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Whoo! Frieda, this is so awesome - I love the "free-ness" of it, for lack of a better word! I, too, would love to "cruise on the rising sun/in the south of France," as you put it.

And, although some of this may be figurative, I actually have danced "a sultry tango amidst a moonlit Brazilian jungle." Perhaps you have too...but it's quite the memorable experience! Whether you've done all these things yet or not, the imagery is so wonderfully dreamlike and relaxing. The way you've described everything almost sent me into dream land.

Intricately, exquisitely pen'd!

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is more straightforward than your usual works love, not that it makes a difference...everything you write is brilliant...nobody mixes and meshes imagery like you do...I like how it reads like a catalogue of self-contained fantasies but ends with a declaration of wanting to love...unparalleled brilliance as always Mrs.R...let me know when you arrive at that Italian villa k? ;) xo

Posted 10 Years Ago


That is one heck of a dive Frieda! Loved it!whoop whoop!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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I believe you just made me smile! thank you for that, always a pleasure to read, even better when it ends in with a smile. It's not often i finish a poem and there is a mood of fun in the air.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love this! The adventurous nature is coming out at full blast and the fire and passion of life and love are soaring in your words! Fantastic! Definitely a favorite of mine! xo (:

Posted 10 Years Ago



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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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