...another coffee Senryu

...another coffee Senryu

A Poem by Frieda P
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Good morning :)

"

Bringing sexy back,

coffee in the early morn

won't you java me



© 2014 Frieda P


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Frieda P

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won't you java me.

Killer Line Frieda My friend.


Not a big Fan of bring Sexy Back But wow
the video fit this write so very nicely of such
I say it was a good song for a sexy poem LOL...

I loved this I love Coffee this was perfect.


Thank you for your lovely review and comment
you left on my page and this wonderful poem.


Blessings. kindred poet

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Lol your review made me laugh, thanks so much kindred poet, yeah...it's kind of a fluff song but fit.. read more
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

You're very welcome. HE...HE. It's my pleasure always. blessings. kindred poet



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i like this little sip of sensuality.
and i don't even like coffee...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Think of it as hot chocolate :) Thanks jacob....
won't you java me.

Killer Line Frieda My friend.


Not a big Fan of bring Sexy Back But wow
the video fit this write so very nicely of such
I say it was a good song for a sexy poem LOL...

I loved this I love Coffee this was perfect.


Thank you for your lovely review and comment
you left on my page and this wonderful poem.


Blessings. kindred poet

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Lol your review made me laugh, thanks so much kindred poet, yeah...it's kind of a fluff song but fit.. read more
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

You're very welcome. HE...HE. It's my pleasure always. blessings. kindred poet
"won't you java me..." So, that's what we're calling it now, eh? ;)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

...and btw, while I still have you here, where's my margarita poem??! ;P
Rita L. Sev

9 Years Ago

Ha! This site is driving me nuts lately - moving slowly, not showing all reviews at the top, can't .. read more
Frieda P

9 Years Ago

I know, it's making me nutz too..the other night I couldn't log out, all kind of fun quirks!
"won't you java me..." So, that's what we're calling it now, eh? ;)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

I have no clue what you're talking about Rita ;) ha.....
A caffeine induced, mind blowing senryu of the night before....and now for ' afters ' Xo xo ?

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tom

9 Years Ago

You certainly did ..... And some !
Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Mission accomplished :)
Tom

9 Years Ago

Yummy, yummy !dc
This was.... hot, just like the coffee... Tasty too.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Thanks Kusa...
Oh yeah!!! ;)

I'll have that coffee anytime!...

Such an enticing senryu...

I like the video it's dark, intense, and Yummy (a bit of a silver fox)!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Well you know boys, they never grow up, so by then, at least they're somewhere in the vicinity...kid.. read more
Michael G.

9 Years Ago

Some of us just get grey and bald. But the coffee is still pretty strong! Nice work, my friend.
Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Nice of you to show for a cuppa java hon!

...and I have no doubt. ;)
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ron
WOW. I would so love to Java...um someone ;)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ron

9 Years Ago

Wired? How is espresso wired :)
Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Don't you get all hopped up when you drink it? I had one in Italy once and nearly jumped out of my s.. read more
ron

9 Years Ago

Its very good. I like it strong.
Sometimes words are inadequate, so you'll have to do with an emoticon. ;)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

*wink* I'll take it ;)
I'd get in trouble if I really said what was on my mind...married and all...can I have a second cup please...a double dose of caffeine will clear my vision a bit better...or I just need a better prescription for my glasses...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

You hardly need to after that statement Glen hah
Glen Yumang Manese

9 Years Ago

Just say it wasn't you..It wasn't me...just like the song...this must be AKA FAD talking out loud..... read more

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