Hush now, go to sleep! ........

Hush now, go to sleep! ........

A Poem by Frieda P
"

_it's not a lullaby_

"

Behind her


 mystiqu'd  facade


      she's still


 a frightened child  


 curves of a woman


yet, wide eyed awe in her eyes


   her honey'd breasts attract men,


    ensnared, shrouded past,


                 stops her


 dead in her tracks


 in her silly head


                she had a dream


     was never meant to be


 this way,


her true heart


 intentions, 


             poisoned


 as a naive girl


her innocence stolen


              upon the knee 


of the the man,


should have been


               her one true hero


    instead 


her safe haven


               was violated


    behind closed doors


in  night's pursuit 


       of    'hear no evil'...


       prayers were


 never heard


   her silent secret screams


 kept locked 


    in a gilded prison 


made for one ~


                 ...her soul to keep


    

Hush now baby, go to sleep! ...

© 2014 Frieda P


Author's Note

Frieda P

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I am trying to look for the right words but I can't find them... Your words broke
me down in tears as I read them over and over. Anger, pain and sadness were but
a few of the emotions that were tearing through my heart. This injustice goes on
but too many times and it's either unspoken of or ignored. Thank You for letting
your heart speak for all those who cannot.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

You said all the right words Luis, thanks so much....



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I have no words to express what I feel right now...the actions of such horrendous crimes are very rarly dealt with seriously and this is what encourages more such crimes.. I deeply offer my condolences to all those angels whose life have been made a living hell by such monsters..

Posted 9 Years Ago


I was sent here by a nurse, if the review appears random its her fault. You paint a vivid picture of abuse, torment and overcoming a trouble past, backed by a raw emotion displayed in each line to the finale. Abuse, physical and mental leaves a lasting impression, it becomes a scar that the person will never leave behind, and or heal from, “Time doesn't heal all wounds, but with time you can begin to scar.” Thanks for the read.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

I imagine you mean April, she's a gem, not sure what you mean by random but thanks for the read and .. read more
Jack Wolfe

9 Years Ago

Yes, I meant, April. I meant random, because I assumed it was an older piece (which now I see its on.. read more
Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Ahh I get it, not really, some people love to dig deep into the vault, KL is famous for dredging up .. read more
i like the form you use for this .. adds impact to each line .. i have too many friends that have shared this story with me ..from there own lives ... the horror of such abuse to little children is appalling ... there is no healing in this .. only scarring ... you have said it all Freida .. :(
E.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Hardly E...it goes so much deeper, thanks for your kind words my sweet friend. x
I have a close friend who was abused while a child by a family member, finally coming to terms with it, 40 years later. I understand the hurt and pain expressed here, in a small way, and only second hand. Powerfully done, Freida.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Good luck to him/her, I'm not sure ever come to 'terms' with it, you just realize it is what it is a.. read more
I am trying to look for the right words but I can't find them... Your words broke
me down in tears as I read them over and over. Anger, pain and sadness were but
a few of the emotions that were tearing through my heart. This injustice goes on
but too many times and it's either unspoken of or ignored. Thank You for letting
your heart speak for all those who cannot.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

You said all the right words Luis, thanks so much....
Frieda, this makes me so sad and angry at the same time. More than injustice, there are just no words to express the depth of atrocity... Your poetry shines a harsh light...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

You said it, way past injustice Rita, grazie mille....
I was attracted by the title,I was expecting for gore and scary stuff but I was not let down when I read it

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much Subaru.
BRAVO nicely written my friend.


I love Emilie Autumn's music she's
awesome nice choice.


Thank you for sharing thank you for
all your lovely reviews and comments
you left on my page.


Blessings. kindred poet

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

Well I don't like much heavy music but I do like some of her music I have her on my music on face bo.. read more
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

yes she is very good with Playing Instruments very Talented Lady she is.
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

9 Years Ago

I've always loved her name Emilie Autumn / Autumn is one of my favorite seasons :)
OMG, Frieda another outstanding write. Your so talented, nicely penned my friend. ;-)

Kaze~

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much dear Kazie, you always make me smile :)
♔ CrownedDevil ☾

9 Years Ago

Your very welcome Frieda, and I'm glad a put a smile on ur face. :-)
I loved the imagery, word choice, structure, and flow of this poem! I really liked when you said "poisoned as a naive girl her innocence stolen upon the knee of the man..." I thought that was excellent! Great write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Grazie mille Lucid Dreamer, muchly appreciated.

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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