~ a sorta bohemian rush

~ a sorta bohemian rush

A Poem by Frieda P
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Guilty in sentiments of sin,
 demanding of
delectations' expectations
as to where the moon
meets ocean's sensations,
& why tree nymphs make forests
envious of the sky,
seeking divinity of color's rhyme
in ravaging warm tides,
whilst crimson's hue and
vast cobalt blue's edgy drink
 sip the gypsy dandelion wine,
smelling the sweet scent 
of rain in my veins
a tango'd elixir writhing 
over frothy seas
wandering tirelessly in
consensual surrender's rush,
visions of sensual dandelions swaying 
wafting to high heaven's
            bourgeois holy grail
fighting wayward lion's
          of  roaring constellations, 
written on ether's haze in
adrenaline  junkies'
eternal  blood & sweat  in
tears of love sonnets cloud riffs,
breathing in spiritual
          stargazer's implosions
of conceptual
 sexual last rites
playing on heartstrings,
foreboding the dread
            of apathy & indifference 
communing in serendipitous
       sighing moments,
blessed in a 
sort  of 
bohemian
 poetic 
madness 

© 2014 Frieda P


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Frieda P

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This bohemian poetic madness is so much fun... Colorful, pleasant, steamy, well-rounded mix of AWESOMESAUCE.... those tree nymphs do love the beauty of the colorful rhyme but they are drunk on that wine... dancing with the dandelions and in awe of the lioness as she enraptures all that she meets.. her roar seducing the constellations to shine just for her... sighing in content of her breathtaking ramblings that glitter across the page... I love this ma'am.. your creativity and heart shine through in this one and it is STUNNING... going in fav's for sure... also.. can't go wrong with Zeppelin... nope...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

7 Years Ago

scary concept.... run!.... lol
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Very funny hunny!! haha
AprilRN1210

7 Years Ago

I thought so..... made me giggle....:P... lol



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Amazing flow of thoughts. I had to read again. This bohemian poetic was alive and well in the amazing poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


I found myself lost in this world you described, and not really wanting to return either. Bohemian lifestyle has always been something appealing to me.

whilst crimson's hue and
vast cobalt blue's edgy drink
sip the gypsy dandelion wine,

Dandelion wine sounds absolutely delicious to me for some reason.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Bohemian indeed. The title led me to one thought before reading the piece, and then you wound up and delivered some thing totally different. Sexy and fun. Thank you.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Curious to know what you were thinking originally, thanks Cory.
Vivid images dance upon my eyelids leaving feathery tickles.
Beautiful poem. :)
Or to quote Ape: AWESOMESAUCE

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Ha love me some awesomesauce, grazie mille Ana Sophia :)
I kind of like the word bourgeois, and very neat pairing with holy grail. Digging the funky fun vibe of this piece.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

It's definitely an interesting word, I rather like Bohemian myself, thank KL.
I find myself, waiting, merely to give a few words of praise. So, I will listen to the music you provide.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks Jon.
So many beautiful images here and you make colors come alive in your words. I like "he sweet scent
of rain in my veins" - that's a sensation I just love. Wonderful writing:) Penny

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much Penny, very sad avatar, come back and don't let the asshats get to you! :)
I need a crown to place all of these jewels in. Frieda P. I will need to take a course in poetry reviewing or something - you poetry leaves me without words and most of the time without breath. Wish I could say more, but - I really enjoyed this poem today. It really took my breath away.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cryingkate

7 Years Ago

You can bporrow one of my Crowns or Tiara
Creativity....the blues, reds, verbs, and nouns of it....do a gypsy's dance round the campfire of life in this one, Frieda. So ramble on, Joisey goil....your ramblings are exceptionally enjoyable to read. Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago


the wild and exciting ramblings of a poet at the peak of their creative powers and that dear Frieda is you, a blazing star across the night sky....Fantastic.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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