Not My Dreams

Not My Dreams

A Chapter by Ethan Paz
"

My dream will never come into reality. The least I can do is make your dream come true.

"

Never . . . could I finished-                          

The dreams my heart                                    

Lay upon me. Diminished-                          

I part . . . never start.                                     

 

Though the goals of my past,                                     

Though the dreams of my mind,         

Fail.             

Yet shall I sail to entail the dreams of you.           

 

Your dreams shall rise.                                  

Yes, and so shall mine.                                  

For both shall rise in the skies.                  

You and I combine.   

 

Your goals will be my goals,

Your dreams will be my dreams.

Success-

Is certain, not hidden from a curtain to you.

 



© 2011 Ethan Paz


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lovely writing, Ethan!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is a compelling piece Ethan...it leads such a dual existence. This beauty in the devotion of finding glory in the achievements of your partner, and sorrow...sorrow that it is in the loss of one's own dreams. The delicate delivery of your words evoked these parallels so well. Nicely done ~ Rose

Posted 13 Years Ago


Hi Ethan, so long since I read your writing.
This is beautiful. I feel so much love within the words.
Together we can make it, it says.
Lovely writing.

Chloe

Posted 13 Years Ago


"Your dreams shall rise.
Yes, and so shall mine.

For both shall rise in the skies.

You and I combine. "
A strong and powerful poem. Dreams keep us alive and our hope strong. I never tell someone their dreams are useless. Each of us want more or less. A positive and strong poem. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote


Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow,
Thanks Ethan. I could use a little encouragement today. Good prose man. BZ

Posted 13 Years Ago



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