Father

Father

A Poem by from the desk of
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For my father gone but always in my heart

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From the depths of my heart,
amid the confusion that is life,
there you are, with advice,
holding my hand when times get tough,
even though you are gone from this life,
remembering you today as always.

© 2011 from the desk of


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Such a wonderful feeling to carry with you about a father. The loss is there but so too, the richness of tenderness.

Posted 12 Years Ago


such a tender poem displaying the hopes of having a fathers love again. Nicely done:) a beautiful dedication to the man who lent his hand in trying times and left a print upon your heart.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Touching poem from the heart; cheers.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Such a very sweet and wonderful dedication to your father. Well done. Keep on penning.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent write with few words. A little Puncuation flaws, nut other than that, tis amazing and touching

Hugs,AnnaMaria

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I am a lover of words, I have no formal training but I do enjoy reading and writing poetry, I am here to learn and to share please feel free to give helpful advice and I will be happy to do the same. more..

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